In the developed world, average life expectancy is increasing. What problems will this cause for individuals and society? Suggest some measures that could be taken to reduce the impact of ageing populations.
In the modern world, people are experiencing high longevity and this trend is continuing to proliferate. Besides anticipated advantages, adverse situations are unprecedented which can lead to undesirable consequences. Although problems associated with this trend are unusual, several solutions are being implemented to mitigate those devastation results.
There are various concerns attributed to the impact of increasing average life expectancy. First and foremost, in terms of individuals, sequences of spiritual and physical illnesses alongside weak family bonds are often reported since nuclear families are emerging among the young society. Consequently, older people have to stay isolatedly and take responsibilities of daily heavy household chores. Following this, uncontrolled diets can result in long-term diseases, for instance, diabetes and obesity. Moreover, when regarding society comprehensively, burdens on governmental finance and infrastructure of nursing homes are inevitable. This is primarily because of pensions and social welfare for senior employees after retirement and poor facilities of nursing homes leading to low sanitation.
Although problematic situations are devastating, measures are coming into practice to gradually conciliate those conflicting aspects. Encouraging and reemerging extended families consisting of three generations living under the same roof is one of the most efficient policies. As a result, families' close-knits are consolidated. In other words, stable living conditions with high cleansy and healthy lifestyles are guaranteed. In addition to this, making lives of the aged populations phenomenal and motivating is taken into consideration. To achieve this, national authorities have allowed companies to extend retirement age and provide light working positions for senior workers. Examples can be seen clearly in terms of Japan where people are expected to work longer than usual. Consequently, an interesting life with adequate salary and assured outcomes of companies can diminish financial burden on society.
To put things in a nutshell, although undesirable situations have never been encountered before, policies are being published to mitigate the problems, namely encouraging extended families and longer career time. I recommend that those measures should be taken seriously in order to protect the rights of the elderly. If this suggestion is practiced, positive results will be comprehensive.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, consequently, first, if, moreover, regarding, so, for instance, in addition, as a result, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 25.0 13.1623246493 190% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2124.0 1615.20841683 132% => OK
No of words: 347.0 315.596192385 110% => OK
Chars per words: 6.12103746398 5.12529762239 119% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.31600926901 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.19570164936 2.80592935109 114% => OK
Unique words: 227.0 176.041082164 129% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.654178674352 0.561755894193 116% => OK
syllable_count: 684.0 506.74238477 135% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 2.0 1.60771543086 124% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 2.10420841683 285% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.0773178642 49.4020404114 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.2 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.35 20.7667163134 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.9 7.06120827912 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.208044381926 0.244688304435 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0558917860889 0.084324248473 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0559636996504 0.0667982634062 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.112325851446 0.151304729494 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0175513755064 0.056905535591 31% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.1 13.0946893788 123% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 20.38 50.2224549098 41% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 17.92 12.4159519038 144% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 11.03 8.58950901804 128% => OK
difficult_words: 144.0 78.4519038076 184% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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