In the developed world, average life expectancy is increasing. What problems will this cause for individuals and society? Suggest some measures that could be taken to reduce the impact of ageing populations
The developed nations witnessed gradual growth in the average life span which can result in a lot of issues for BOTH individuals and society. To cut down the impact of aging-trend populations, the authorities need to propose several appropriate solutions
The growing population of elderly people can be highly problematic for many reasons. One of the key disadvantages is the weakening manpower of the nations because the proportion of retired people increases while the main productive labor is the young adults that trend upward. This problem can be significantly affected the economy as the army force of the countries. Another adverse implement of the average life span is human health. For example, Infectious diseases easily impact on elderly people more than that on young ones’ which resulted in putting a heavy load on the healthcare system. Therefore, the budget investment for the healthcare system increases while the economic source is unstable.
In order to combat those problems, governments must have active, timely, and correct policies. One of the best options is to promote population rejuvenation via a fertility policy. For instance, The increase in the birth rate in Japan also makes the population more balanced. In addition, women can be the central breadwinners in spite of stay-at-home moms that decline the burden of the national economy. The next measure that should be taken into consideration is to organize many healthy clubs such as yoga, meditation, do cardiovascular exercises... for the elderly to maintain an active lifestyle as well as exercise their health, thus preventing some infectious diseases.
In conclusion, the increase in average life expectancy will not be an alarming problem if this problem should be adopted in the right measure
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Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, so, therefore, thus, well, while, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, such as, as well as, in spite of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 10.4138276553 19% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 8.0 24.0651302605 33% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1514.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 281.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.38790035587 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09427095027 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94243862493 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 176.041082164 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.601423487544 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 486.9 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 7.0 2.52805611222 277% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.5889510463 49.4020404114 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.142857143 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0714285714 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.35714285714 7.06120827912 133% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.304670620828 0.244688304435 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0885476435658 0.084324248473 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.080317679551 0.0667982634062 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.193913133924 0.151304729494 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0858497465276 0.056905535591 151% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 13.0946893788 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.98 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.02 8.58950901804 117% => OK
difficult_words: 96.0 78.4519038076 122% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.78957915832 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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