The development of tourism contributed to English becoming the most prominent language in the world. Some people think this will lead to English becoming the only language to be spoken legally. What are the advantages and disadvantages of learning one language in the world?
It is asserted by some groups that the tourism trade development made the English becoming the most spoken language of the whole world, and one of the consequences of this is that English will become the only spoken language .although there are a number of disadvantages involved to this trend, benefits accruing to having one language are by no means negligible.
On the plus side, there are a number of advantages for English becoming the only language spoken. To begin with, speaking one language can affect the communication between people from different parts of the world since in the past they were concerned about problems like language problems or even misunderstanding but now there may not be such problems .as a consequence, it will bring people closer to each other and the circle of their friend will be broaden .moreover, it can have a positive impact on global trade, the more countries speak to one language, the more trade they will have with each other.
However, speaking to one language can have its detrimental consequences. To be precise, if all countries tend to speak to one language, they will become more similar and less unique, and the diversity of culture and language will disappear in a few years. So there will be no reason for individuals to travel to abroad because there is no special thing about it just usual staff. additionally, language involves history and culture, thus language loss means history loss which should never be forgotten in any circumstances and its must be kept for next generations
In conclusion, having one globally spoken language can be both problematic and rewarding. While it may have beneficial effects on communication and trade, it also can cause problems for history and diversity.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, may, moreover, so, thus, while, in conclusion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 7.85571142285 204% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1470.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 291.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.05154639175 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13022058845 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80585823317 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 154.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.529209621993 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 465.3 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 16.0721442886 50% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 36.0 20.2975951904 177% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 144.173506581 49.4020404114 292% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 183.75 106.682146367 172% => OK
Words per sentence: 36.375 20.7667163134 175% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.5 7.06120827912 149% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.380477193528 0.244688304435 155% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.179666882207 0.084324248473 213% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.154356517305 0.0667982634062 231% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.254218089692 0.151304729494 168% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.154698154154 0.056905535591 272% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 20.5 13.0946893788 157% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 34.94 50.2224549098 70% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 17.3 11.3001002004 153% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.6 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.46 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 78.4519038076 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 19.0 9.78957915832 194% => OK
gunning_fog: 16.4 10.1190380762 162% => OK
text_standard: 21.0 10.7795591182 195% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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