some people suggests that industries should be developed in the outskirts of the city. This essay will discuss the merits and drawbacks of suburban location for industries.
Firstly, there are so many advantages for industries being developed in suburabs.Companies needs a huge workforce, which are the major expense of each units; will be available cheaper in the outskirts of the cities, as the living costs are low. In addition most of the raw materials for industries are supplied by rural areas are often transported to cities where the factory located ,which cost much to the firms. In contrast if the companies located in rural areas can reduce the transportation of goods abruptly. Secondly, factories produce considerable environmental pollution, hence it will be better to avoid crowded places such as cities, while the suburbs are either minimally populated or inhabited, are the ideal location for industries. these location will harm minimally to human and environment as there will be better chance for disposing industrial wastes in a safer way. For example cement factories are built in remote locations where the raw materials are available and will make minimal human impact.
On the other hand, shifting factories to rural areas will make some issues in transportation and infrastructural aspects. For example factories need heavy machineries which will be difficult to move to suburbs. Electricity and good road facilities can be an issue in some areas, besides the manufactured goods need to carry back to cities for distribution. Finally skilled labourers will be lacking in rural set up, hence need to bring them from far distance.
Overall, shifting factories to suburbs helps the companies to reduce financial costs of the workforce but it will compensate with escalating transportation costs. Environmental costs are also will remain same but the impact on the community can be reduced.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: Some
some people suggests that industries should ...
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Suggestion: addition,
... the cities as living costs are low. In addition most of the raw materials for industrie...
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Suggestion: contrast,
...cities which cost much to the firms. In contrast if the companies located in rural areas...
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Suggestion: These
... are the ideal location for industries. these location will harm minimally to human a...
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Message: Did you mean 'this location' or 'these locations'?
Suggestion: this location; these locations
... are the ideal location for industries. these location will harm minimally to human and enviro...
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Suggestion:
...ons where the av materials are available and will make minimal human impact. On ...
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Suggestion:
...to move to suburbs. Electricity and good road facilities can be an issue in some ...
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Suggestion: Finally,
... carry back to cities for distribution. Finally skilled labourers will be lacking in ru...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, finally, first, firstly, hence, if, second, secondly, so, while, for example, in addition, in contrast, such as, to start with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 19.0 7.85571142285 242% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 6.0 24.0651302605 25% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1665.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 316.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.26898734177 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21620550194 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94960306276 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.54746835443 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 526.5 506.74238477 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.8073764917 49.4020404114 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.0 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0666666667 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.0 7.06120827912 156% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.125494784821 0.244688304435 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0529491422554 0.084324248473 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.032788380625 0.0667982634062 49% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0913969173141 0.151304729494 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0333709337369 0.056905535591 59% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.0946893788 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.29 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.98 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 78.4519038076 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.