Developments in technology have brought various environmental problem. Some believe that people need to live simpler lives to solve environmental problems. Others, however, believe technology is the way to solve these problems. Discuss both views and give your opinion?
In the era of globalisation and urbanization, technology now plays pivotal roles in our life and consequently it has resulted in thousands of environmental problems. While some individuals argue that living a simpler life is an advantageous solution, others firmly believe that the development of advanced technology is the best solution to this problem. I personally agree with the latter because of some following reasons.
On the one hand, it is beneficial for people to simplify their lives which is also considered as a solution to environmental issues. Firstly, once they reduce unnecessary household electronic equipments such as laundry machine, dishwasher or heaters, they will help the government to save a great amount of electricity. Consequently, it will avert deforestation since electricity demand decreases. Secondly, recycling used goods and devices is much more favorable in lieu of directly throwing them to landfills For example, secondhand clothes which require hundreds of years to disintegrate will be saved and remade into a little vintage purse or curtain. Thereby, it is unchallenging to environmentalists to solve other environmental issues.
On the other hand, I contend that with the fast-paced development of sophisticated technology, environmental problems will be tackled once and for all in the near future. The first reason is that thousands of waste treatment system have been devised to purify wasted water from thousands of manufacturing factories globally before they are poured into the ocean. As a result, water pollution is no longer a hot issue. The second explained to my perspective is that by continuously developing high-tech, alternative and cleaner source of energy will be introduced to our lives. Instead of exploiting fossil fuels, which are about to exhausted to generate electricity, infinite and clean source of energy such as solar energy will be a perfect alternative.
In conclusion, though simplifying our lives is beneficial to solve environmental problems, it seems to me that using technology is the best solution.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, while, for example, in conclusion, such as, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1768.0 1615.20841683 109% => OK
No of words: 319.0 315.596192385 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.54231974922 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22617688928 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.30467001957 2.80592935109 118% => OK
Unique words: 195.0 176.041082164 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.611285266458 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 569.7 506.74238477 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.2770388173 49.4020404114 112% => OK
Chars per sentence: 126.285714286 106.682146367 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.7857142857 20.7667163134 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.71428571429 7.06120827912 138% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.220071897756 0.244688304435 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0720690078804 0.084324248473 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0842139306817 0.0667982634062 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.157531058822 0.151304729494 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0949446687422 0.056905535591 167% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.1 13.0946893788 123% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 32.22 50.2224549098 64% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.15 12.4159519038 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.02 8.58950901804 117% => OK
difficult_words: 107.0 78.4519038076 136% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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