Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Medical care should be free for everybody. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Everyone care about their health because staying healthy is necessary to enjoy our lives. Therefore, medical care is an important part of our lives. People feel better if they know they can be treated well when having problems. Although it is a matter of controversy whether or not medical care should be free for everyone, I believe that getting a medical treatment should not be free of charge.
To begin with, if medical care is free, people might go to a hospital even if they do not have any serious health problems. If everyone starts going to see doctors, the doctors' office would become very crowded. When a person seriously needs doctor's attention, he or she would need to wait for a long time, which is not the best environment to get medical treatment. However, if people have to pay money to see a doctor, they would not go unnecessarily because no one wants to like to waste their own money. Therefore, they will go to a hospital to get help only when they needed.
In addition to the previous point, if medical expense is free, the government need to subsidize all the expenses, which can cause a lot of burden to the government's money. The government has many responsibility to make its citizens' life better. In order to assure the good quality of life to its citizen, the government need to invest money in not only medical care but also infrastructures, education systems and national defense. It is impossible for the government to afford all the cost of medical care.
To sum up, having a good medical care is very important for us, but it should not be free for everybody. It will prevent people from going to see a doctor unnecessarily. Moreover, it will not cause any financial burden to the government.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 268, Rule ID: WHETHER[7]
Message: Perhaps you can shorten this phrase to just 'whether'. It is correct though if you mean 'regardless of whether'.
Suggestion: whether
... Although it is a matter of controversy whether or not medical care should be free for everyon...
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Line 5, column 170, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'doctors'' or 'doctor's'?
Suggestion: doctors'; doctor's
...eryone starts going to see doctors, the doctors office would become very crowded. When ...
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Line 9, column 154, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'governments'' or 'government's'?
Suggestion: governments'; government's
... which can cause a lot of burden to the governments money. The government has many responsi...
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Line 9, column 192, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun responsibility seems to be countable; consider using: 'many responsibilities'.
Suggestion: many responsibilities
...e governments money. The government has many responsibility to make its citizens life better. In or...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, moreover, so, therefore, well, in addition, to begin with, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 7.85571142285 191% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1437.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 304.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.72697368421 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17559525986 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68490179115 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 154.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.506578947368 0.561755894193 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 457.2 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 2.10420841683 285% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.2414469893 49.4020404114 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.8125 106.682146367 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.75 7.06120827912 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.201459306127 0.244688304435 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0717710871007 0.084324248473 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0910135728118 0.0667982634062 136% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.137811088631 0.151304729494 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0589743003973 0.056905535591 104% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.3 13.0946893788 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.15 12.4159519038 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.28 8.58950901804 85% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 78.4519038076 66% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.