Do you think the consumer should avoid over packed products or it is the responsibility of the producer to avoid extra packaging of products?” Give your views or any relevant example with your own experience.
We encounter people with different perceptions on various aspects of life experiences. With regard to the over packaging products, we can witness people holding two sets of opinions. One set of people believe that producer must avoid extra packaging whereas, the other set of people say consumer can stop buying such items. In my opinion both parties must work on this to control supplementary covering.
First and foremost packaging ensures that people can buy and use products, as and when they want with good condition. However it is undeniable that some goods have excessive covering. Moreover, the packaging industry is highly competitive and they need to come-up with better solutions to compete with competitors. Whenever manufacturers spend higher cost to fulfill their wrapping needs, eventually consumers will have to bare the extra cost.
From consumer perspective, the packaging does not really matter for majority of the buyers as they mostly care about price, quality of a product. But the packages used for these products are not environmental friendly. It is also recommended to involve government organizations to pretend these poisonous gases to save our environment.
To conclude, producers should be careful of the material usage while packaging the products, It is also recommended that health ministry should place rules and regulations. Last but not least buyers also follow these rules to have healthiest society.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 120, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: However,
...nd when they want with good condition. However it is undeniable that some goods have e...
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Line 5, column 231, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'recommended involving'.
Suggestion: recommended involving
... not environmental friendly. It is also recommended to involve government organizations to pretend the...
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Line 7, column 183, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[3]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'not the least'.
Suggestion: not the least
...d place rules and regulations. Last but not least buyers also follow these rules to have ...
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Line 7, column 227, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'have the healthiest'.
Suggestion: have the healthiest
...least buyers also follow these rules to have healthiest society.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, moreover, really, so, whereas, while, in my opinion, with regard to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalization wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1227.0 1615.20841683 76% => OK
No of words: 224.0 315.596192385 71% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.47767857143 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.86867284054 4.20363070211 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83947873895 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 147.0 176.041082164 84% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.65625 0.561755894193 117% => OK
syllable_count: 375.3 506.74238477 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.7357804901 49.4020404114 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.3846153846 106.682146367 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.2307692308 20.7667163134 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.53846153846 7.06120827912 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.169569320834 0.244688304435 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0535550394203 0.084324248473 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0436808697606 0.0667982634062 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0907243082669 0.151304729494 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.018030371094 0.056905535591 32% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 50.2224549098 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.21 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.13 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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