There has been long much contention about wheather producer or consumer should avoid the over packed items.It can be agreed the in this competitive world producer should constantly think new ideas to increase their sales.In my view producer should be the one to avoid extra packaging of products as it effects our environment and also consumer have to pay extra money for those kind of goods.
On the outset there are numerous reasons why producer should avoid packaging but the most conspicuous one stems from the fact that producer uses non-decomposable material for product which effect an environment. They have gone so far to sell their product, for instance, product are packed in tray and again by plastic.Too much packaging creates problem,its hard to manage waste.
Another key justification is that, producer who use extra packaged food to stay long term in market ,consumer have to pay extra money for the overpackaged food.For example, producer have to increase money in their product for profit thats why they add extra money to the product.
In conclusion overpackaged food should be avoid by producer to protect our environment and save money of consumer.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, as to, for example, for instance, in conclusion, kind of, in my view
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 41.998997996 60% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 983.0 1615.20841683 61% => OK
No of words: 191.0 315.596192385 61% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.14659685864 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.71756304063 4.20363070211 88% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72612527185 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 114.0 176.041082164 65% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.596858638743 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 305.1 506.74238477 60% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 16.0721442886 31% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 38.0 20.2975951904 187% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 96.3298499947 49.4020404114 195% => OK
Chars per sentence: 196.6 106.682146367 184% => OK
Words per sentence: 38.2 20.7667163134 184% => OK
Discourse Markers: 17.4 7.06120827912 246% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.290221828721 0.244688304435 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.16495547145 0.084324248473 196% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.067329481659 0.0667982634062 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.184449519317 0.151304729494 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0702443569314 0.056905535591 123% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 21.9 13.0946893788 167% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 32.91 50.2224549098 66% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 18.1 11.3001002004 160% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.18 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.16 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 78.4519038076 56% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 27.5 9.78957915832 281% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 17.2 10.1190380762 170% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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