Does modern technology make life more convenient or was life better when technology was simple?
We live in technological era, in which internet has become part of our life. Modern technology makes life brilliant. Past technology did not have more features compare to present technology.
First of all, 21th era has more technical equipment such as, household
Equipment, washing machine, or cooking instrument etc. Because of this equipment, our life becomes more convenient. If, I particular talk about computers, then, we can save our time as well as money also. E-mails play the most curious role in our generation. Electronics mail is the basis of every business.
Albeit, computer can saves hundreds of movies, songs and data also. Technology gives us car or any vehicle, so, we can travel from one place to another place easily. Mobile phones are the boon of technology, which helps us for communicate to any corner of the world. Firm produce millions of product daily with the help of superior machines. We can prevent from various diseases, due to the world class facility in hospitals. Technology helps to us keep going to the moon also.
On the flip side, technology has also certain cons. In the past technology, people could free from much more tension. People know the value of exercise, because woman washed their clothes by their hand, so, they had exercise daily, and did not suffer from health sickness. Due to simple technology, past era did not have expensive equipment, so, they could save their money also. But, people faced many troubles in past, because of normal technology.
To pen down, I conclude that, modern technology gives more uses life than we used to be. Also, “time is money”, and latest technology easily save it.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 200, Rule ID: ALSO_SENT_END[1]
Message: 'Also' is not used at the end of the sentence. Use 'as well' instead.
Suggestion: as well
..., we can save our time as well as money also. E-mails play the most curious role in ...
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Line 4, column 23, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[2]
Message: The verb 'can' requires the base form of the verb: 'save'
Suggestion: save
...every business. Albeit, computer can saves hundreds of movies, songs and data also...
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Line 4, column 64, Rule ID: ALSO_SENT_END[1]
Message: 'Also' is not used at the end of the sentence. Use 'as well' instead.
Suggestion: as well
...aves hundreds of movies, songs and data also. Technology gives us car or any vehicle...
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Message: 'Also' is not used at the end of the sentence. Use 'as well' instead.
Suggestion: as well
...logy helps to us keep going to the moon also. On the flip side, technology has als...
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Line 5, column 375, Rule ID: ALSO_SENT_END[1]
Message: 'Also' is not used at the end of the sentence. Use 'as well' instead.
Suggestion: as well
...ipment, so, they could save their money also. But, people faced many troubles in pas...
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Line 5, column 413, Rule ID: IN_PAST[1]
Message: Did you mean: 'in the past'?
Suggestion: in the past
...y also. But, people faced many troubles in past, because of normal technology. To pen...
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'first', 'if', 'so', 'then', 'well', 'such as', 'as well as', 'first of all']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.284431137725 0.247107183377 115% => OK
Verbs: 0.131736526946 0.155533422707 85% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0688622754491 0.0946595960268 73% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0658682634731 0.0501214627716 131% => OK
Pronouns: 0.059880239521 0.0437548338989 137% => Less pronouns wanted. Try not to use 'you, I, they, he...' as the subject of a sentence
Prepositions: 0.101796407186 0.122226691241 83% => OK
Participles: 0.0119760479042 0.0403226058552 30% => Some participles wanted.
Conjunctions: 2.58918014499 2.80594681477 92% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0269461077844 0.0326793684256 82% => OK
Particles: 0.00299401197605 0.00163938923432 183% => OK
Determiners: 0.0449101796407 0.0861772015684 52% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0179640718563 0.021408717616 84% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0059880239521 0.011925033212 50% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1671.0 1933.35771543 86% => OK
No of words: 277.0 316.048096192 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.03249097473 6.12580529183 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07962216107 4.20517956788 97% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.317689530686 0.374742101984 85% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.249097472924 0.28420135186 88% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.176895306859 0.203846283523 87% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.129963898917 0.137316102897 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58918014499 2.80594681477 92% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 176.037074148 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.628158844765 0.56093040696 112% => OK
Word variations: 70.800900107 60.7387585426 117% => OK
How many sentences: 21.0 16.0891783567 131% => OK
Sentence length: 13.1904761905 20.7743622355 63% => OK
Sentence length SD: 26.8906410478 49.517814964 54% => OK
Chars per sentence: 79.5714285714 127.492653851 62% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.1904761905 20.7743622355 63% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.47619047619 0.814263465372 58% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38877755511 137% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 3.99599198397 150% => OK
Readability: 38.1002234829 49.1944974215 77% => OK
Elegance: 1.54651162791 1.69124875643 91% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.193193919343 0.332605444948 58% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0880762103502 0.102741220458 86% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0593603236387 0.0668466124924 89% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.48589161303 0.534860350844 91% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.147930441695 0.148594505496 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0760176695409 0.134430193775 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0823775777846 0.0742795772207 111% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.160539399183 0.324371583561 49% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.046869490742 0.0638462369009 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.121464158909 0.228012699653 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0794839292888 0.058150111329 137% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.68436873747 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.41683366733 205% => Less neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 11.0 5.90881763527 186% => OK
Negative topic words: 1.0 2.5751503006 39% => OK
Neutral topic words: 4.0 1.9629258517 204% => OK
Total topic words: 16.0 10.4468937876 153% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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