Dogs are one of the most popular pets in the world, yet many would, yet many would say it is inappropriate to have them in built-up inner-city areas?
Do you agree or disagree?
Give reasons for your answer, and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
You should write at least 250 words.
It is known that dogs are domestic pet that are famous for their popularity among humans. However, some people think that having dogs in the cities must be prohibited. I disagree with this point of view and I think that people may have dogs even in the center of the city. But it might have negative impact to the dogs' health.
First of all, dogs are our friends that live with people for ages. There exist different breeds of dog, like herding dogs, small dogs, rescuing dogs and so on. All these breeds help to men. For example, rescuing dogs save person’s life in the dangerous situations or help to move for the blinds. If men restrict living dogs in the inner-city area, initially, people will suffer from it. Therefore, I think that human have not right to request restrict living dogs in the cities.
Secondly, dogs stimulate people to do sport. In other words, men should walk with their pets every morning and evening. Most people run in the parks in the early morning. According to the World Health Organization, people, who have dogs are healthier and do more exercises, which reduce heart attack and stroke risks. That is why, I think dogs must live in the city areas.
On the other hand, there must be conditions for the dogs. I personally think that dogs must live in the condition of enough space, but not in small studios, where they cannot move during the day. For example, Labs are big dogs that love to play and run. If they cannot move it may affect to their health. Though, people must be conscious about having dogs in the city.
To conclude, dogs are the most frequent pets in the world. Even some people think that they must live only in the suburbs, it does not mean that it is an argument. Dogs are companions of men and help to improve humans' life by rescuing them and stimulating to do exercises.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 315, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'dogs'' or 'dog's'?
Suggestion: dogs'; dog's
...ut it might have negative impact to the dogs health. First of all, dogs are our...
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Line 11, column 255, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “If” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...are big dogs that love to play and run. If they cannot move it may affect to their...
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Message: “Though” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...not move it may affect to their health. Though, people must be conscious about having ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, therefore, even so, for example, i think, first of all, in other words, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 7.30460921844 192% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1520.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 330.0 315.596192385 105% => OK
Chars per words: 4.60606060606 5.12529762239 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.26214759535 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.2266521502 2.80592935109 79% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.50303030303 0.561755894193 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 448.2 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 16.0721442886 143% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 29.4894809992 49.4020404114 60% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 66.0869565217 106.682146367 62% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.347826087 20.7667163134 69% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.13043478261 7.06120827912 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.4128256513 234% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.155598149004 0.244688304435 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0556790158616 0.084324248473 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0366120173587 0.0667982634062 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.103066964562 0.151304729494 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0260557481325 0.056905535591 46% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.5 13.0946893788 57% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 74.19 50.2224549098 148% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 11.3001002004 57% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 8.87 12.4159519038 71% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.82 8.58950901804 79% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 78.4519038076 66% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 9.78957915832 56% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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