Due to the development and rapid expansion of supermarkets, many small local businesses are unable to compete. Some people think that the closure of local businesses will bring about the death of local communities. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
These days supermarkets are the very first choice of any shopper. It is an accepted fact that due to rapid expansion of the supermarkets in some countries, many local outlets are losing business. Some people believe that this is very harmful for the local communities because it leads to the closure of many local businesses. I completely disagree with the argument that the supermarkets are dangerous for local businesses and local communities.
Many believe that local businesses are not able to compete with the supermarkets. Firstly, supermarkets offer low prices because they buy in bulk and get good discount from the suppliers. On the contrary, a local shopper buying from the same supplier has to pay a higher price and hence they cannot sell their goods at cheap rates. Secondly, supermarkets offer a wide range of products under one roof. That is why customers prefer to visit them instead of the local shops that sell only a limited choice of products.
On the other hand, I believe that the expansion of the supermarkets is advantageous for the local communities. First and foremost, it reduces the monopoly of local businesses. Now all local people have good opportunity to buy at low and competitive price. Also, the local vendors have the opportunity to optimize their processes. For instance, in China, local Chinese businesses have been successful competing against Wal-Mart, which is the biggest supermarket chain in the world. Secondly, by adopting new technology and new way of doing business, local businesses can easily win over big chain of supermarkets.
To sum up, it is true that many local businesses are not able to compete with the Supermarkets. Nevertheless, it is not impossible. On the other hand, the Supermarkets are helping local communities by offering products at low prices and at the same time they are challenging local businesses to improve their processes. Therefore, I am of the opinion that instead of closing down local businesses must learn from the supermarkets and put in effort to innovate their processes. In the end, the competition between supermarkets and local stores will only benefit the local community.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, hence, nevertheless, second, secondly, so, therefore, as to, for instance, it is true, on the contrary, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1818.0 1615.20841683 113% => OK
No of words: 352.0 315.596192385 112% => OK
Chars per words: 5.16477272727 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.33147354134 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94841474951 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 176.041082164 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.477272727273 0.561755894193 85% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 581.4 506.74238477 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.5416201064 49.4020404114 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.9 106.682146367 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.6 20.7667163134 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.7 7.06120827912 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.426880557026 0.244688304435 174% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.145325566116 0.084324248473 172% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.091832295493 0.0667982634062 137% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.29379032617 0.151304729494 194% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0906062337682 0.056905535591 159% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 50.2224549098 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.35 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.84 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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