The economic imbalance between rich and poor nations is now more extended than it has ever been before. What do you think are the main reasons for this difference, and what do you think can be done to overcome the gap? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant example from your knowledge or experience
The financial disparity between impoverished and well off nations has intensified extensively. The unevenness has many reasons, which have affected people adversely. However, some corrective measures could help such countries to bridge this gap.
The major challenge faced by under-developed countries is the lack of natural resources. Countries deprived of naturally existing minerals and fossil fuels cannot sustain their economic growth and trade with other governments. Furthermore, brain-drain backed by illiteracy is another difficulty confronted by poverty-stricken governments. As economically challenged nations are unable to provide quality education to all the natives, so those who get enlightened tend to relocate in other countries, in search of jobs.
Ever-widening rift leads to sub-standard lifestyle in the form of malnourishment and meagre medical care, which further leads productive work-force to indulge in anti-social activities. Moreover, when politically corrupted minds hold financial reins in their hands, then they exhaust the economic resources for personal benefits instead of spending on public well-fare. So, such countries could never come out of the vicious cycle of misery.
To bridge the gap, helping hand of wealthy states can work like wonders. Citizens of underprivileged lands can be guided, in using the most advanced technology under cross-training programs. Besides, strict population control laws are the need of the hour to ensure the practical distribution of resources leading to satisfaction and prosperity.
To conclude, the wall of financial disparity has to come down for the overall well-being of humanity, and every efficient state must extend its hands to support the global brother-hood.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, furthermore, if, moreover, so, third, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 6.0 24.0651302605 25% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1525.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 262.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.82061068702 5.12529762239 114% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02323427807 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.23558107728 2.80592935109 115% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.656488549618 0.561755894193 117% => OK
syllable_count: 466.2 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.8358251407 49.4020404114 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.307692308 106.682146367 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.1538461538 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.30769230769 7.06120827912 61% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.104808453527 0.244688304435 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0325237266217 0.084324248473 39% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0295313495761 0.0667982634062 44% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0590800312844 0.151304729494 39% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0272362882523 0.056905535591 48% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.1 13.0946893788 123% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 34.26 50.2224549098 68% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.5 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.48 12.4159519038 133% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.35 8.58950901804 120% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 78.4519038076 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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