Education, from preschool through university, should be paid for by the government and therefore free to students.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
With rising costs of living and commodities and ever-increasing competition in the job market, obtaining a solid education is becoming increasingly more important. While more people are pursuing a solid education till university now, several of them are burdened with the cost of it. Making education free for students via government funding can result in a win-win situation for the country as well as each student by contributing towards the economy in the long term while also reducing the financial burden on the students.
Despite education being one of the most important aspects of one's life, it is one of the first to be let go of in times of financial crises. Several students either drop out of schools and universities due to inability to pay their tuition fees or end up burdened with hefty loans for a large part of their adult life. Having the government fund education can ease this pain for many and significantly improve the literacy rate of a country. An increased percentage of educated individuals in a country can prove advantageous for the country's economy as more skilled workers are available in the country to provide different services. Therefore, in the long run the benefits of educating an individual far outweigh the cost associated with it for the government.
Furthermore, institutions getting funded by the government would be more inclined to make the admission process solely merit based and less likely to accept donations or bribes by students trying to get a spot at the school. This means that only those students who are fit to study a certain subject or course will be able to do it, further reducing drop-out rates and improving the chance that these students will be able to contribute towards a better society.
All in all, the government should pay for education from preschool through university as it can boost the literacy rate and economy of the country while also improving the person's standard of living.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, if, so, therefore, well, while, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1639.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 326.0 315.596192385 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.02760736196 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24917287072 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82352757254 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 187.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.573619631902 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 526.5 506.74238477 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 20.2975951904 143% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 44.0315439146 49.4020404114 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 149.0 106.682146367 140% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.6363636364 20.7667163134 143% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.63636363636 7.06120827912 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.255197496327 0.244688304435 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0918662419092 0.084324248473 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0538712282242 0.0667982634062 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.160282234896 0.151304729494 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.040266239972 0.056905535591 71% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.1 13.0946893788 131% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.04 50.2224549098 84% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.49 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.9 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.5 9.78957915832 158% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.1190380762 134% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.7795591182 148% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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