Environmental protection is the responsibility of politicians, not individuals as individuals can do too little.
What extent do you agree or disagree?
It is sometimes argued that only government has the main role in preserving the environment. While I agree with this point of view, I do not believe that citizens are not included.
On the one hand, the executive branch has an important duty in solving problems related to the environment. One reason is that the government has the power to impose policies on individuals such as punishing wrongdoers who create waste disposals. Therefore, if there is an environmental problem, politicians will be responsible because they do not manage closely. Another reason is that when government makes it a legal requirement, this will be the only solution to decrease the bad habits of people. People often carry out the rule when the punishment or fine is given, not from their conscience, so, the legal requirement is effective.
However, these aforementioned reasons can be seen as the opposite angle. Firstly, the awareness of people is also the main factor to sway the environment. Viet Nam is an example for this trend since there are a rich variety of laws are established, but it can be seen that this is the country that has numerous wastes on street, lake and the gas emissions from vehicles is increasing. Secondly, forcing people is out of democracy as people living in the age of independence so the decisions often from the giving of civilizations. Hence, citizens have the significant duty of protecting the environment, not only the government.
In conclusion, not only the politicians but also all the civilizations should aware of the prominence of the environment. In some case, the government should give the legal obligation to enhance people’s responsibility, but this is also the task of individuals
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, hence, however, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, while, in conclusion, in fact, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 19.0 8.3376753507 228% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1445.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 284.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.08802816901 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10515524023 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.08253482193 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.549295774648 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 467.1 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.0652635051 49.4020404114 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.214285714 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.2857142857 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.42857142857 7.06120827912 119% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.143499368373 0.244688304435 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0494486596327 0.084324248473 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0416419893473 0.0667982634062 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0879524625972 0.151304729494 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0225552289147 0.056905535591 40% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 13.0946893788 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.24 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.63 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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