Essay topics Nowadays many people go shopping in their free time Shopping has replaced many other activities that people used to choose as their hobby what is the reason for this Is this a positive or negative development

Essay topics:

Essay topics:
Nowadays many people go shopping in their free time. Shopping has replaced many other activities that people used to choose as their hobby. what is the reason for this? Is this a positive or negative development?

The contemporary epoch is witnessing a sudden burgeon in the activity of shopping conducted by people, and even some avocations of individuals are being substituted by this interest. Many causative factors can be attributed to this phenomenon, such as incline in personal wealth of people and the desire to exalt the social status. However, I opine that this is an unpropitious development, especially for environment.
Why the trend of shopping is augmenting at an alarming rate? The chief unequivocal ground can be accredited to the fact that the living standard of dwellers is amplifying in contemporary time vis-a-vis past, owing to which people now have more surplus money at their disposal. Further, denizens are bombarded with the endorsements of distinct products throughout their daily routine, either in the way of digital advertisements or via the large billboards or other tangible sources. Ergo, persons, being enticed with these adverts and having spare capital to squander, tend to splurge on redundant items. This can be illustrated by the study conducted by Stanford University in 2018 wherein researchers have discovered that average income of persons has increased threefold just over the last five decades. Hence, the trend of shopping is on the rise.
Howbeit, this phenomenon has plethora of repercussions. The most prominent impact is on the environmental condition. As the import and export of the products is elevating, it is causing various direct as well as indirect impacts on the ecology in the form of escalating pollution and afflictions on the fauna and flora. Most of the new items are packaged in the plastic wrappers and polythene bags which are the key sources of land and marine pollutions as these are non- biodegradable. Because of these, the fertility of the land is declining as well as the marine species are perishing. For instance, conferring to the official figures revealed by the Ecological Department of India, around 60 percent of populace of marine fauna has become extinct due to the over usage of polythene.
Laconically, surge in the availability of advertisements and the earnings of the people are the eminent causative factors behind this phenomenon which has significant unfavourable effect on the ecosystem. Hence, the government should take some initiatives to mitigate these ramifications.

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Average: 8.4 (1 vote)

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, however, if, so, then, well, even so, for instance, such as, as well as

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 13.1623246493 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 60.0 41.998997996 143% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1986.0 1615.20841683 123% => OK
No of words: 371.0 315.596192385 118% => OK
Chars per words: 5.35309973046 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.38877662729 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.08440839874 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 215.0 176.041082164 122% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.579514824798 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 640.8 506.74238477 126% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 61.5510028477 49.4020404114 125% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.823529412 106.682146367 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.8235294118 20.7667163134 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.88235294118 7.06120827912 69% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.4128256513 234% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.1820086033 0.244688304435 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0499404214343 0.084324248473 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0447635610586 0.0667982634062 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.103560183996 0.151304729494 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.063931022598 0.056905535591 112% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 13.0946893788 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.75 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.08 8.58950901804 117% => OK
difficult_words: 127.0 78.4519038076 162% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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