Every country has poor people and every country has different ways of dealing with the poor.
What are some of the reasons for world poverty? How can the poor be helped?
Give reasons for your answers and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
There are various types of nations in this world. Some are industrialised, others are developing or under-developed. However, almost each nation falling under any of these categories has people living below poverty line and to eliminate poverty they try to adopt various techniques. There can be various which give rise to poverty and there are some ways to help those who are ailed by it.
To begin with, the biggest factor that makes people live under poor conditions is the inability to earn enough money required to uplift the living standards. Undoubtedly, deficiency of money breeds poverty. The reason behind this is that nothing can be bought in this world without paying for it. Moreover, being needy of finances, poor people cannot send their children to schools which offer good quality education because such schools are out of their league. When these children who fail to become well-educated step into their adulthood, it is very difficult for them to get good job opportunities. As a result, just like their parents, they also become forced to dwell in the same impoverished environment. Needless to say, there are many families living poor lives since generations.
However, when it comes to helping the below poverty line dwellers, government can take some steps. First of all, if such people get proper education in their early years then in their later life, they might become able to furnish their lifestyle in such a way that at least their both ends can meet comfortably. Again for this, they need assured assistance in getting employment which only government passed ordinances can provide. Apart from this, many schemes to provide loans to the unwealthy masses at lower interest rates can be started. Without any doubt, this can motivate them to run their own small-scale businesses and earn their livelihood. These types of initiatives can definitely be fruitful.
To conclude, while it can be said that poverty prevails in every country due to various causes like lack of education and work but combating and curbing it is not difficult if certain measures are weaved by governmental authorities.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'woven'.
Suggestion: woven
...s not difficult if certain measures are weaved by governmental authorities.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, moreover, so, then, well, while, apart from, at least, as a result, first of all, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 24.0651302605 150% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 53.0 41.998997996 126% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1785.0 1615.20841683 111% => OK
No of words: 348.0 315.596192385 110% => OK
Chars per words: 5.12931034483 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.31911543099 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68021201858 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 206.0 176.041082164 117% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.591954022989 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 558.9 506.74238477 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.6518796044 49.4020404114 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.1666666667 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.3333333333 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0 7.06120827912 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.222462008726 0.244688304435 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0642438802945 0.084324248473 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0422332371433 0.0667982634062 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.126599592489 0.151304729494 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0157926921551 0.056905535591 28% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 13.0946893788 95% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.47 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.39 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 78.4519038076 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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