Every year several languages die out. Some people think that this is not important because life will be easier if there are fewer languages in the world.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
These days, there has been an ongoing argument that the diversity of language is not essential in virtue of hindering the connection between people in the world. I take the view that this idea appears fairly compelling except in several cases.
There are a plethora convincing reasons for the extinction of some languages. First, since humankind is in the era of globalization, the using of some ancient languages is not necessary. Indeed, people has employed English or French as the dominant language for both commercial purposes or exchanging information; therefore, the problem that several languages die is inevitable. Second, these language is too complicated to study, especially ancient Chinese, which trigger a low literacy in the nineteen century in China. The current president had to transform it into a more comfortable form for residents to learn. Besides, these language could create a barrier for foreign investors because they have the tendency to cooperate with company using the languages which are easier for them to access.
Apart from the reasons expressed above, however, I also believe that the resident and government should take proper actions to preserve these languages. Despite its unsuitableness in the modern world, it is still a part of the historic and should be preserved by descents to show respects to the previous generation. Besides, the government could employ it as a way to attract the visitor to explore much more about ancient civilization. Egypt's symbolized language is the most evidence to support this view because that it is not longer used anymore, but its mysteries is the most concerned by visitor when they come to Egypt.
All in all, although the historical value of these languages is no denying, I still believe that it would be better to use well-known languages and protect it through other activities.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'this language' or 'these languages'?
Suggestion: this language; these languages
...al languages die is inevitable. Second, these language is too complicated to study, especially...
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Message: Did you mean 'this language' or 'these languages'?
Suggestion: this language; these languages
...e form for residents to learn. Besides, these language could create a barrier for foreign inve...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, however, second, so, still, therefore, well, apart from
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1568.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 300.0 315.596192385 95% => OK
Chars per words: 5.22666666667 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16179145029 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8281599829 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 176.041082164 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.586666666667 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 494.1 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.8770299144 49.4020404114 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.615384615 106.682146367 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.0769230769 20.7667163134 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.30769230769 7.06120827912 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.23272955734 0.244688304435 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0759601702382 0.084324248473 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0484117459416 0.0667982634062 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.126703470212 0.151304729494 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0548649577551 0.056905535591 96% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 13.0946893788 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.35 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.41 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 78.4519038076 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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