Every year several languages die out. Some people think that this is not important because life will be easier if there are fewer languages in the world.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
Language bridges the individuals across the world. It is heartbreaking to see that the extinction of certain languages is annually happening. Considering the fact that the communication would be a lot easier with lesser languages, some people consider that this case is not a case worth worrying about. Aside from being more convenient to interact with, I personally disagree with the statement.
It is true that the disappearance of some lingoes does not mean the end of the world. Yet, it is the end for eternity, for certain races or tribes. Languages always contribute to the richness of cultures and the standard of civilizations. Never will people fully understand the uniqueness of a civilization without the assistance of its language. Language somehow portrays the characteristics of its ancestors. For instance, the English language emits the classic style and intellectual nature of its origin, the British, who once were considered the highest class in the world during a certain period.
Thus, by getting familiar with a language, it definitely gives the learner an aura of its origin, its people and its history. Indeed, many languages to explore, sometimes, mean that we have so many things to work hard and learn which may lead us to get frustrated or discouraged. Nonetheless, in order to utterly understand a particular ethnicity, the intrinsic of its language is not something to overlook. In other words, the vanishment of many lingoes indicates that many cultures and civilizations will further be less noticed, less explored and more exposed to extinction.
Additionally, there are varieties of ethnicity in the global continents that are yet investigated. The tribal people are still in existence in the wild as the indigenous tribes, proving that only language could bridge their rich knowledge of the wildlife with modern society. Hence, should the annual perishment of languages enhance the public awareness about the threat exposed to the primitive societies and highlight the need to preserve them.
To sum up, it is inevitable that the least used languages will further be extinct eventually on the global basis. It is acceptable to acknowledge the ease of communication in the future. Nevertheless, as a person who is enchanted by the beauty of languages and different cultures, the condolence to the certain tribe that dies together with its language affirms me to stand at the spectrum of ‘disagreement’.
Comments
Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 240, Rule ID: ADVERB_WORD_ORDER[10]
Message: The adverb 'Never' is usually put between 'will' and 'people'.
Suggestion: Will Never people
...ures and the standard of civilizations. Never will people fully understand the uniqueness of a ci...
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Line 4, column 579, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...xplored and more exposed to extinction. Additionally, there are varieties of eth...
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Line 7, column 413, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
... stand at the spectrum of ‘disagreement’ .
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, if, look, may, nevertheless, nonetheless, so, still, thus, for instance, in other words, it is true, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 59.0 41.998997996 140% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2065.0 1615.20841683 128% => OK
No of words: 391.0 315.596192385 124% => OK
Chars per words: 5.28132992327 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.44676510885 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.09948769631 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 221.0 176.041082164 126% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.565217391304 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 648.9 506.74238477 128% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.4555318166 49.4020404114 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.25 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.55 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.4 7.06120827912 91% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.242677485472 0.244688304435 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0679992689535 0.084324248473 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0429411742734 0.0667982634062 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.135937201959 0.151304729494 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0597884828023 0.056905535591 105% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.0946893788 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.34 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.18 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 114.0 78.4519038076 145% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 240, Rule ID: ADVERB_WORD_ORDER[10]
Message: The adverb 'Never' is usually put between 'will' and 'people'.
Suggestion: Will Never people
...ures and the standard of civilizations. Never will people fully understand the uniqueness of a ci...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 4, column 579, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...xplored and more exposed to extinction. Additionally, there are varieties of eth...
^^^
Line 7, column 413, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
... stand at the spectrum of ‘disagreement’ .
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, if, look, may, nevertheless, nonetheless, so, still, thus, for instance, in other words, it is true, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 59.0 41.998997996 140% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2065.0 1615.20841683 128% => OK
No of words: 391.0 315.596192385 124% => OK
Chars per words: 5.28132992327 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.44676510885 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.09948769631 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 221.0 176.041082164 126% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.565217391304 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 648.9 506.74238477 128% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.4555318166 49.4020404114 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.25 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.55 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.4 7.06120827912 91% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.242677485472 0.244688304435 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0679992689535 0.084324248473 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0429411742734 0.0667982634062 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.135937201959 0.151304729494 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0597884828023 0.056905535591 105% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.0946893788 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.34 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.18 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 114.0 78.4519038076 145% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.