Every year several languages die out. Some people think that this is not important because will be easier if there are fewer languages in the world.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this topic?
On annual basis some languages become extinct. Some people say it is not essential as life would be eased if languages were less in the world. I disagree with this opinion considering that dialects form a sense of culture and belonging and make life more interesting.
A person’s language or vernacular allows for them to have strong relationships with the people from their society allowing for culture to be passed from generation to generation. If their language dies out they will be a poor sense of belonging to any cultural background due to destroyed platform of association which can be strengthened by common language. For instance, a common language like French if it dies out the French would have a loss in their culture and would find it difficult to learn a new language.
Life is made easier and interesting by diverse languages, which people have an opportunity to learn if they wish to explore. Therefore, instead of allowing languages to die out, opportunity should be made to people to learn these different languages. For example, Chinese language will live for many years as they ensure that they teach in their language only, even foreign students are required to learn it before starting their classes.
To conclude, languages should be treasured so that future generations will have an opportunity to enjoy their cultures fully. This preservation can be ensured by government through allowing the dialects to be taught in schools and books to be written so that the languages do not disappear.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 185, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “If” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...e passed from generation to generation. If their language dies out they will be a ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, then, therefore, for example, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1276.0 1615.20841683 79% => OK
No of words: 252.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.06349206349 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98428260373 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84643053536 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 137.0 176.041082164 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.543650793651 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 397.8 506.74238477 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.653341989 49.4020404114 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.0 106.682146367 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.9090909091 20.7667163134 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.54545454545 7.06120827912 64% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.283814822913 0.244688304435 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.120297599075 0.084324248473 143% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0412485886558 0.0667982634062 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.184228751775 0.151304729494 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0321518828857 0.056905535591 57% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.0946893788 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.36 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.17 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 78.4519038076 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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