Every year several languages die out.Some people think that this is not important because life will be easier if there are fewer language in the world.To what extent do you agree or disagree?
It is true that people are more curious to know some language ,which are very useful throughout the world.Although,this modern tendency is affecting to die out several language in many parts of the world.In this connection, I do not agree with this assertion.However, I believe that every language has unique characteristic, which represent a nation and their creativity with another one.
To begin with , there are some detrimental effects in using a number of languages.Firstly, each language is unique to culture and tradition that can easily introduce them with others.If the language die out in the world.Therefore, their norms and values are gradually dispel in the world.Furthermore, there are many, who feel comfortable to give their opinions in their own language that are not vividly easier to speech another one.Apart from this, to have some language create bitter relationship among the citizen because all are not capable to keep or describe their views by depending another language.Although,to emphasize another norms create rival ties with another state. Pakistan government,for example, emphasized to use in Urdu language for the people of Bangladesh,but they prefer to use their own language in Bangla, Which conflict made the international mother language day that is the symbol of language power.
On the other hand,having a fewer language in the world has some positive development for the individual people. The first and most factor is that it creates a multilateral relationship among people. Even if ,it open the door to study abroad without any difficulty. There are no hindrance to access in taking any lucrative achievement in the globe. Needless to say that language not only give higher success but also introduce many innovative things in the world.It goes without saying that people can easily understand ,while talking or watching with another countries telecasts and their programs or events.English ,for instance, is known as international language ,what is widely used to conversation people with another.By using this language mankind can express their thinking and creativity with another people or country.
In conclusion, commonly spoken language may make life more straightforward. Even though it has some merits for global business. I believe that people can express their beauty ,norms, values in own language, which cannot be worthwhile by using another one.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, may, so, therefore, while, apart from, for example, for instance, in conclusion, it is true, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 7.30460921844 192% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 24.0651302605 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 53.0 41.998997996 126% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2044.0 1615.20841683 127% => OK
No of words: 373.0 315.596192385 118% => OK
Chars per words: 5.47989276139 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.39467950092 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.23373365824 2.80592935109 115% => OK
Unique words: 205.0 176.041082164 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.549597855228 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 641.7 506.74238477 127% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 33.0 20.2975951904 163% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 199.810033749 49.4020404114 404% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 185.818181818 106.682146367 174% => OK
Words per sentence: 33.9090909091 20.7667163134 163% => OK
Discourse Markers: 16.1818181818 7.06120827912 229% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 32.0 5.01903807615 638% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.277481144202 0.244688304435 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0917826733336 0.084324248473 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0849179186608 0.0667982634062 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.179177804604 0.151304729494 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0633296367725 0.056905535591 111% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 21.3 13.0946893788 163% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 29.52 50.2224549098 59% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 17.3 11.3001002004 153% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.1 12.4159519038 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.38 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 97.0 78.4519038076 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 29.0 9.78957915832 296% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 15.2 10.1190380762 150% => OK
text_standard: 29.0 10.7795591182 269% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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