Is it necessary for us to include meat in our meals? In other words, should we become a vegetarian because we do not have to eat meat to be healthy? This tricky question has caused a myriad of arguments among people, scientists. And as far as I am concerned, while vegetable foods have a critical impact on our health, meat also plays an essential role in our diet. Hence, I partly agree with the notion of becoming a vegetarian.
Firstly, long history has proved that vegetables supply humans with a sea of nutrition like vitamins, proteins, carbohydrates, ... They appeared and were consumed by our ancestors for an extremely long time ago. Moreover, many surveys bear out the fact that our chimpanzee-like forebears ate mainly vegetable foods by looking into their meals. In fact, necessary nutrition is included in vegetable foods. That is why vegetarians can be as robust as meat-eaters because their bodies absorbed the same nutrients. Therefore, vegetarians can be fully healthy without eating meat and they even have lower rates of heart disease.
Despite the fact that vegetables provide people with equivalent nutrients, most of them are seemingly in favor of meat as a component of their meals. There are various reasons leading to this reality, but I believe the key one is food satisfaction. Sitting at a table that is full of vegetable foods can be unpleasant to many people since along with nutrition, they also require tastes from the dishes. This is true because some types of meat possess distinctive flavors that cannot exist elsewhere. In addition, consuming meat is also a consequence of the past when agriculture was not ameliorated, our ancestors were still dependent on meat to avoid nutritional deficiency. Thus, humans cannot be forced to eliminate meat from their list of foods.
To sum up, it is a good idea that we balance the consumption of vegetable foods and meat. It not only allows people to live a healthy life but also protect the food resources.
Essay evaluations by e-grader
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, hence, if, look, moreover, so, still, therefore, thus, while, in addition, in fact, in other words, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 24.0651302605 141% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1654.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 333.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 4.96696696697 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27180144563 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79770834851 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 196.0 176.041082164 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.588588588589 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 524.7 506.74238477 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 33.4027716268 49.4020404114 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.0526315789 106.682146367 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.5263157895 20.7667163134 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.15789473684 7.06120827912 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.232790828112 0.244688304435 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0705576502567 0.084324248473 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0968984146195 0.0667982634062 145% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.143421030626 0.151304729494 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.102247161404 0.056905535591 180% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 13.0946893788 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.25 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.51 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 78.4519038076 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, hence, if, look, moreover, so, still, therefore, thus, while, in addition, in fact, in other words, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 24.0651302605 141% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1654.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 333.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 4.96696696697 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27180144563 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79770834851 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 196.0 176.041082164 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.588588588589 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 524.7 506.74238477 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 33.4027716268 49.4020404114 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.0526315789 106.682146367 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.5263157895 20.7667163134 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.15789473684 7.06120827912 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.232790828112 0.244688304435 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0705576502567 0.084324248473 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0968984146195 0.0667982634062 145% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.143421030626 0.151304729494 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.102247161404 0.056905535591 180% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 13.0946893788 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.25 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.51 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 78.4519038076 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.