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Everyone should become vegetarian because they do not need to eat meat to have a healthy diet. Do you agree or disagree?

Essay topics: Everyone should become vegetarian because they do not need to eat meat to have a healthy diet. Do you agree or disagree?

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A healthy life is one of the most important goals in everyone’s life. Some people argue that a human is not necessary to consume meat to gain a strong health so that all people should have a vegetarian diet. Although I accept that vegetarian foods are good for health, I strongly disagree with the idea that everyone should stay away from meat.

It is obvious that people consume foods not only to provide energy to body’s activities but also for to taste of the delicious foods. Every person has his own food preferences and different favorite foods as some individuals prefer meat while others like vegetables. Eating should be an enjoyable moment when people can try and taste various kinds of foods based on their taste as long as they can manage the balance of food nutrition. As a result, everyone should choose their own diet according to their health status and eating hobbies.

The second reason supporting my opinion as people should eat plenty kinds of foods is that the needed energy of job characteristics. In fact, manual labor need higher amount of energy for their daily activities at work compared to office worker so that they must eat protein which provides larger amount of calories. In this case meat is more suitable for them to have a sufficient power requirement. For instance, farmers have to do lots of hard work during a day. If they only consume vegetable they might feel dizzy and easily get tired when they are cultivating the crops.

In conclusion, although some people think all individual should go for vegetarian, I would argue that people are not essential to have a diet which lacks meat but they should balance vast categories of foods to keep healthy.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 326, Rule ID: TRY_AND[1]
Message: "Try and" is common in colloquial speech, but "'try to'" is recommended for writing.
Suggestion: try to
... be an enjoyable moment when people can try and taste various kinds of foods based on t...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, second, so, while, for instance, in conclusion, in fact, as a result

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1419.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 292.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.8595890411 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13376432452 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55798535544 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 176.041082164 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.571917808219 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 436.5 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.0323945679 49.4020404114 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.153846154 106.682146367 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.4615384615 20.7667163134 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.38461538462 7.06120827912 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.279373263978 0.244688304435 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0958495837246 0.084324248473 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0495870453493 0.0667982634062 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.171773980818 0.151304729494 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0469443994668 0.056905535591 82% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 13.0946893788 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.2 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.92 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 78.4519038076 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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