Explain some of the way in which humans are damaging the environment. What can governments do to address these problem? What can individual people do?
Recently, greenhouse gases and global warming have become global serious issues, which resulted from human activities instead of natural disasters that made extinction of the dinosaur more than a billion years ago. Industrial waste and man-made catastrophes are two main factors contributed to these consequences. To save the Earth, both individuals, as well as governments should take into action as soon as possible.
As I've mentioned before, industrial waste and man-made catastrophes are damaging the environment. Industrial waste material includes gas and polluted water which contains chemical toxins, released from factories causing pollution the air, water even soil. For example, in several study findings, experts say that most of the greenhouse gases are formed by over-concentration of CO2 in the atmosphere from industrialization. Besides, more and more artificial disasters are reported during a short time. In 2019, bushfire occurred in Brazil lasted for several months leading to destroying the Amazon rainforest- the largest rainforest in the world, normally, it helps to decrease nearly 20% of CO2 amount absorbed every day, it is also a home for rare animals and flora.
To encounter real facts, governments have to take action immediately. Developed countries should make a negotiation to cut off the amount of industrial gases and develop machines that can fill poison water before releasing to the environment. In addition, authorities also need to control exploited wood activities as well as raising their inhabitant's awareness of its effect on human society.
For an individual, the necessity to obey the law is considerable. Moreover, each of us should take small meaningful actions such as collecting litters, growing plants or updating their own knowledge about protecting the environment.
The environment is being destroyed day by day because of the consequences of industrialization and artificial disasters. The union among countries, governments, and civilians will play an important role to save the world.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 352, Rule ID: BOTH_AS_WELL_AS[1]
Message: Probable usage error. Use 'and' after 'both'.
Suggestion: and
...s. To save the Earth, both individuals, as well as governments should take into action as ...
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Line 2, column 4, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I've
...ke into action as soon as possible. As Ive mentioned before, industrial waste and ...
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, if, moreover, so, well, even so, for example, in addition, in fact, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 10.0 24.0651302605 42% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1737.0 1615.20841683 108% => OK
No of words: 308.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.63961038961 5.12529762239 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18926351222 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.18734445878 2.80592935109 114% => OK
Unique words: 197.0 176.041082164 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.63961038961 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 540.0 506.74238477 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.9596215416 49.4020404114 111% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.8 106.682146367 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5333333333 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.13333333333 7.06120827912 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0647125793353 0.244688304435 26% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0196635378873 0.084324248473 23% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0170034368774 0.0667982634062 25% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.032904030602 0.151304729494 22% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0248573844647 0.056905535591 44% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.4 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 34.26 50.2224549098 68% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.5 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.43 12.4159519038 124% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.01 8.58950901804 117% => OK
difficult_words: 105.0 78.4519038076 134% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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