A number of people fret about the risks of some venturous sports such as sky diving or skiing, therefore, they claim that these types of sports should be forbidden for the safety of many people. I agree that participating in these extreme sports latent lots of danger. However, I also believe that they should not be completely prohibited but to be carried out prudently.
There are various reasons explaining why extreme sports should be banned. Every kind of sport is associated with risks, but extreme sports have the highest rates of injury because of their environmental elements as well as a lack of immediate medical care. Accordingly, sky diving often takes place on high mountains where bring the most enthusiastic atmosphere along with higher risks of free-falling happens upon landing. This is an explanation for the deaths of thousands of Americans and Europeans. Furthermore, if these extreme sports participants get injured and have access to medical care immediately, their mortality rates can dwindle. Unfortunately, there is mostly no kind of medicines can be that helpful when it comes to venturous sports.
Although there are plenty of serious complaints about the hazards of these sports, I suppose that qualified people with sufficient equipment should be allowed to enjoy the adventurous ambiance as well as spectacular landscapes when taking part in sky diving, skiing or surfing. Life is full of fatigue and concern and every people need a getaway to release stress and these adventurous sports are somehow a brilliant remedy for these people. Nevertheless, safety should always be the most vital priority. There should be some obligations about an appropriate health condition and support elements for each type of sport that guarantee personal security.
In conclusion, extreme sports are truly dangerous, however, they can not be entirely forbidden due to humans' demands. It means that there should be particular stipulates about safety for each participant and sport.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 74, Rule ID: SKY_DIVING[1]
Message: Did you mean 'skydiving'?
Suggestion: skydiving
... risks of some venturous sports such as sky diving or skiing, therefore, they claim that t...
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Line 2, column 271, Rule ID: SKY_DIVING[1]
Message: Did you mean 'skydiving'?
Suggestion: skydiving
...of immediate medical care. Accordingly, sky diving often takes place on high mountains whe...
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Line 3, column 248, Rule ID: SKY_DIVING[1]
Message: Did you mean 'skydiving'?
Suggestion: skydiving
...ctacular landscapes when taking part in sky diving, skiing or surfing. Life is full of fat...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, also, but, furthermore, however, if, nevertheless, so, therefore, thus, well, i suppose, in conclusion, kind of, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1683.0 1615.20841683 104% => OK
No of words: 316.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.32594936709 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21620550194 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82575445484 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 180.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.569620253165 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 522.9 506.74238477 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.3901488639 49.4020404114 114% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.2 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0666666667 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.66666666667 7.06120827912 137% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.279554507692 0.244688304435 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.100232033438 0.084324248473 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0504653059587 0.0667982634062 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.181392530944 0.151304729494 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0459433569628 0.056905535591 81% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.63 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.18 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 78.4519038076 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.