Farming is the backbone of every country, but nowadays , many youngsters hesitate to enterin this profession.
Why is this the case? What can be done to avoid it?
Although agriculture is a crucial industry for every country, many youths do not prefer it as their career. Many factors are involved in this issue which will be discussed in this essay, and practical solutions to solve this problem as well.
Negative perception and limited access to credit are the two leading reasons for leaving agriculture. The first factor has been created by societies that consider agriculture as a non-prestigious job and non-profitable as well. A profitable and a respectable job is what every parent needs for their children; therefore, children have been insisted since childhood rather to be a doctor or an engineer than to be a farmer. As a consequence, youngsters are reluctant to enter into farming industry, even though they are unemployed. The second reason has also demotivated potential young entrepreneurs. Banks turn away young famers because they do not think that farming is a viable business and that land is not a sufficient collateral. So that, youths are often unable to find the financial assistance they need for their business whereby they lose their interest and confidence in this industry.
In order to solve this problem, some practical suggestions can be given. For the second issue, governments should make initiative by connecting young farmers with investors, organizations, and supporters. In addition to that, they can establish small financial institutions that can offer a jump start to youths interested in farming enterprise. This financial support enables youngsters not only to initiate their small farms, but also to experience new agricultural methods such as precision farming and satellite farming. As a result, farming will become more attractive and profitable industry; subsequently, society’s negative perception around farming will break. In turn, more and more youths will enter into agriculture, which will make it a prestigious profession.
Even though many factors make youngsters leave agriculture, it can easily be prevented by giving simple solutions ; thereby, farming can be developed into an attractive enterprise
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Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, second, so, therefore, well, in addition, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 41.998997996 62% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1785.0 1615.20841683 111% => OK
No of words: 323.0 315.596192385 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.52631578947 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23936324884 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.06746494401 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.56346749226 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 551.7 506.74238477 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 2.10420841683 285% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.2845575288 49.4020404114 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.5625 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.1875 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 7.06120827912 71% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.220588325658 0.244688304435 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0697904704738 0.084324248473 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0677863231376 0.0667982634062 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.157311063544 0.151304729494 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0455686117048 0.056905535591 80% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 13.0946893788 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.79 12.4159519038 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.13 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 78.4519038076 117% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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