The first car appeared on British roads in 1888. By the year 2000 there may be as many as 29 million vehicles on British roads.
Alternative forms of transport should be encouraged and international laws introduced to control car ownership and use.
To what extent do you agree or disagree.
It says that primary automobiles were driven in British streets in the end of the 19th century and some people considered that the number of automobiles should be manufactured and some vital rules should be declared so as to control the owners of the automobiles. From my point of view I agree that the government should take the authority.
First and foremost excessive car usage results polution of air. Using from alternative transport meanings like: bicycle or even walking can reduce the contamination of atmosphere and it keeps us healthy. Instead of driving to the nearest places one should ride bicycles to their destinations. Additionally, government should put stringent rules in order to limit the usage of car driving for instance: by increasing the cost of the petrol and making individuals use from their cars only in emergency cases.
Furthermore, they should put limits for every individual car. Consequently, people obey the rules and they drive their cars under limits, though it may be bizarre to all at first. They walk on their work or universities most of their times since the physical activities helpful to their health. In addition, they take benefit from walking and breathing from fresh air without being suffered from some ailments as in example: obesity and physical disability. The less the cars pollute the air the more people will be healthy.
From the points enlisted above, government should deal with this priority seriously. To my way of thinking every individual should consider about the life that they leave for their generations, in this case it leads us to the healthy life.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, first, furthermore, if, may, so, as to, for instance, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1359.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 266.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.10902255639 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03850299372 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72823825239 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 176.041082164 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.582706766917 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 419.4 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.5697592157 49.4020404114 121% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.538461538 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.4615384615 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.07692307692 7.06120827912 86% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.186717262145 0.244688304435 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0694513569991 0.084324248473 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.048111877197 0.0667982634062 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.108835898818 0.151304729494 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0466339256465 0.056905535591 82% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.36 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.67 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.