Friends and family bring more happiness than money and possessions.How far do you agree with this statement?
It is undeniable that everybody wants to be happy and there are many arguments what makes a person happy. Some people think that happiness can come from their family and friends, while other people believe that happiness comes from many and possessions. In my view, happiness comes both from close friends and family and also having enough money and possessions.
In the one hand, everybody needs engough money to spend on accommodation, food and other necessities are less stressed and so have fewer erguments. In addition, they can plan for things like their children's education or buying a bigger house. Furthermore, having more money can help peopleplan for the future so they have more control over their life. However, this kind of happiness often does not last because money and possessions alone cannot bring happiness. For example, children from wealthy families can be very lonely because their parents have to work all day. So, they can hardly take care of their children. It has also been proved that having a good time with friends and family bring people more happiness than a fast car or new clothes.
On the other hand, poor people are not usually happy, even if they havea large families and many friends.It is not easy for people who have seriuos many problems or no change of changing their life. These factors can often cause peopleto have problems with stress and ill health and this will mean they are not able to enjoy life. Their best friends and family may be able to support them and help them by lending money, but this may lead to problems. Therefore, I agree that family and friends are important, but without a good income, they may not be enough.
In conclusion, I believe that both money and possessions as well as a family and friends are significant to happiness.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, however, if, may, so, therefore, well, while, for example, in addition, in conclusion, kind of, as well as, in my view, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 23.0 10.4138276553 221% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 26.0 41.998997996 62% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1492.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 309.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.8284789644 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1926597562 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.38911679381 2.80592935109 85% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 176.041082164 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.540453074434 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 460.8 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 5.43587174349 202% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.1505305822 49.4020404114 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.4666666667 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.6 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.7333333333 7.06120827912 152% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.249667130304 0.244688304435 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0927251982264 0.084324248473 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0740625531995 0.0667982634062 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.156299295047 0.151304729494 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0204346683398 0.056905535591 36% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.73 12.4159519038 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.08 8.58950901804 82% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 78.4519038076 61% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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