Full time university students spend most of the time in studying. They should do other activities too. To what extent do you agree or disagree.
Most students would benefit from some extra curriculum activities along with studies. Personally I believe that students should spend some time doing other activities such as sports , artwork and so on, but they should main attention on education first.
To begin with , spending all time with books can lead to many health problems. For example , it can be stressful, which results in depression and in the worst case scenario suicide. It become so boring to read all time with books. Furthermore who students spend more time on books, they are not active and living a sedentary lifestyle. As a result , they are risk of being overweight. Students can face many health diseases. Simply , all these effects could in long term psychological problems and also put students under pressure while studying . In addition, students do not learn any social skills as they are not able to spend time with friends or go to some other events.
On the other hand, allocating some time to other activities while studying has some benefits . Students should play some sports such as cricket, volleyball, football and so on, playing these types of sport games , student can learn team work , maintain their fitness, social skills. Also some schools offer to part in sport games such as cricket , volleyball, swimming , that students can learn more from sports. students get refreshed after these activities and they can concentrate easily on education. Also Students brains get tired if they study constantly. So I believe that students who spend more time with books gain good knowledge but to learn other skills too , such as team work , they have to participate in activities like sports. But giving some time to extra activities does not mean that students have to focus on that but their main priority should be education.
In conclusion, it is necessary to giving times on books but they should active in other activates which can be benefit to learn other skills.
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'first', 'furthermore', 'if', 'so', 'while', 'for example', 'in addition', 'in conclusion', 'such as', 'as a result', 'to begin with', 'on the other hand']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.258953168044 0.247107183377 105% => OK
Verbs: 0.159779614325 0.155533422707 103% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0909090909091 0.0946595960268 96% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0413223140496 0.0501214627716 82% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0413223140496 0.0437548338989 94% => OK
Prepositions: 0.123966942149 0.122226691241 101% => OK
Participles: 0.0385674931129 0.0403226058552 96% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.53028531 2.80594681477 90% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0358126721763 0.0326793684256 110% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00163938923432 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0523415977961 0.0861772015684 61% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0385674931129 0.021408717616 180% => Less modal verbs wanted (like 'must , shall , will , should , would , can , could , may , and might').
WH_determiners: 0.0110192837466 0.011925033212 92% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1964.0 1933.35771543 102% => OK
No of words: 336.0 316.048096192 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.84523809524 6.12580529183 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28139028586 4.20517956788 102% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.3125 0.374742101984 83% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.232142857143 0.28420135186 82% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.178571428571 0.203846283523 88% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0982142857143 0.137316102897 72% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53028531 2.80594681477 90% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 176.037074148 91% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.479166666667 0.56093040696 85% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
Word variations: 48.8457681682 60.7387585426 80% => OK
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0891783567 112% => OK
Sentence length: 18.6666666667 20.7743622355 90% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.9810565282 49.517814964 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.111111111 127.492653851 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.6666666667 20.7743622355 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.777777777778 0.814263465372 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38877755511 91% => OK
Language errors: 22.0 3.99599198397 551% => Correct essay format wanted or double check grammar & spelling issues after essay writing.
Readability: 41.880952381 49.1944974215 85% => OK
Elegance: 1.73863636364 1.69124875643 103% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.331177428327 0.332605444948 100% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.109399316405 0.102741220458 106% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.100669410368 0.0668466124924 151% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.4709619837 0.534860350844 88% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.190485645668 0.148594505496 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.119035828798 0.134430193775 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0647259541782 0.0742795772207 87% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.287752526459 0.324371583561 89% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0791022516986 0.0638462369009 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.217628090596 0.228012699653 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0416923793301 0.058150111329 72% => The ideas may be duplicated in paragraphs.
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.68436873747 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.41683366733 88% => OK
Positive topic words: 8.0 5.90881763527 135% => OK
Negative topic words: 5.0 2.5751503006 194% => OK
Neutral topic words: 3.0 1.9629258517 153% => OK
Total topic words: 16.0 10.4468937876 153% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.