In the future all cars, buses and trucks will be driverless. The only people travelling inside these vehicles will be passengers.
Do you think the advantages of driverless vehicles outweigh the disadvantages?
In years to come, vehicles as a means of transportation will no longer be operated by man but by robots, all individuals need to do is to be carried in the car to their destinations. In my opinion, the benefits will greatly be helpful to humanity in terms of safety, saving time,energy and resources and though there are a few setbacks that would will arise as a proper solution will make it negligible.
One reason why the future plan of inventing motors without drivers is a welcome idea is that it will increase life expectancy due to the enhanced safety that this process promises. Driverless vehicles employs the use of highly sophisticated machines which will cancel the negative effects of human errors such as tiredness, drunkenness, depression, anxieties and the like thereby making driving safer. In addition, because of enhanced coordination in robotic driving, unnecessary noises from horning is reduced hence, preventing noise pollution.
Another point to consider is that this new innovation will save numerous time and energy. For instance a busy professional who normally drives himself to work for about two hours can channel this time into productive planning while sitting as a passenger on his way to work without expending physical energy. Furthermore, this new trend will be relaxing and comfortable and at the same time save resources because there will be no needs to pay a weekly salary to a driver in case the need arises which will in turn positively impact one's standard of living.
Admittedly, the drawbacks to having driverless motors is unemployment. This can increase the rate of theft and violence in a community especially for those whose driving is their sole means of livelihood although this ugly occurrence can be solved by channeling such people into a more needed occupation such as production or agricultural sector.
In conclusion, eradicating the control of land transport by man is important to the developments of the society and setback that may arise as a result of this such as unemployment can be curbed by diverting their jobs to industries of needs.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, hence, if, may, so, while, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, such as, as a result, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 18.0 7.85571142285 229% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 41.998997996 121% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1767.0 1615.20841683 109% => OK
No of words: 346.0 315.596192385 110% => OK
Chars per words: 5.10693641618 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.31289638616 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94640244708 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 206.0 176.041082164 117% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.595375722543 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 566.1 506.74238477 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 31.0 20.2975951904 153% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 62.3381872272 49.4020404114 126% => OK
Chars per sentence: 160.636363636 106.682146367 151% => OK
Words per sentence: 31.4545454545 20.7667163134 151% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.0909090909 7.06120827912 157% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.238857594803 0.244688304435 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.088440961252 0.084324248473 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0717744112126 0.0667982634062 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.122426991759 0.151304729494 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0795939325619 0.056905535591 140% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.4 13.0946893788 141% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.01 50.2224549098 80% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.4 11.3001002004 136% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.95 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.15 8.58950901804 118% => OK
difficult_words: 109.0 78.4519038076 139% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 19.5 9.78957915832 199% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.4 10.1190380762 142% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.