In the future all cars, buses and trucks will be driverless. The only people travelling inside these vehicles will be passengers.
Do you think the advantages of driverless vehicles outweigh the disadvantages?
People are expecting vehicles, namely cars, trucks and buses, in the near future to drive themselves, without needing human control. This idea of driverless cars comes with both advantages and disadvantages, however, I contend that the latter may be outweighed by the former.
On one hand, automatic vehicles do have some drawbacks. When the trips are fully automated, it means there will be no need for drivers, leading to people losing their jobs. Moreover, those vehicles may be more expensive to buy and repair than normal ones, which could be a hurdle for people, especially those in developing countries, to have one. In some sudden cases and events such as bad weather or people not following the rules, programmed automobiles might not have quick conditional reflects as real people do and result in accidents. Therefore, a fully-automated vehicle world may not seem to be appealing to some.
Despite those negative outcomes, I believe the positive aspects of this scenario would be worthwhile. People could travel and work or do other things simultaneously, and automatic vehicles are supposed to speed up the flow of traffic, both of which can save a lot of time. Also, the trips could be safer and the number of traffic accidents may decrease as automatic cars do not drink or lose focus while driving. As fewer accidents mean people have to pay less on car insurance and healthcare costs, people's money can be saved in the long term. Thus, driverless transportation brings many great benefits, especially a great solution to traffic problems.
In conclusion, although it has certain drawbacks, having automated vehicles in the near future may be better and more useful in the long term plan.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, may, moreover, so, therefore, thus, while, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1434.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 281.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.10320284698 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09427095027 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78289084458 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 176.041082164 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.626334519573 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 442.8 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.9091319821 49.4020404114 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.307692308 106.682146367 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.6153846154 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.15384615385 7.06120827912 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.304253756948 0.244688304435 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.10096482984 0.084324248473 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.035290116707 0.0667982634062 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.172920694787 0.151304729494 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0310977702872 0.056905535591 55% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.3 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.12 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.