In the modern era with increasing advanced technology, many people are likely to prefer reading everything online instead of using printed materials. However, I don’t agree to the disappearance of printed books and newspapers due to their important role in people’s life and advantages making they outweigh e-paper.
Though e-newspapers are gaining popularity thanks to the portable and environmentally friendly impacts, traditional newspapers have favorable impacts in several cases. Firstly, pages of a newspaper allow comfortable space for necessary information including words, images, graphics. When reading them on screen, readers are restricted on reading the whole pages, so, they have to scroll the screen, which brings the inconvenience for them. Secondly, e-news are not highly accurate because of the lack of qualified verification. Many news are posted by anonymous authors and concentrate on attracting the public attention with breaking news, for instance, covid-19 fake news.
Besides newspapers, paper books currently dominate the world and still exist widely in the future as digital books also have negative sides. A drawback is that reading books online only allows reading in internet-connected areas. When people travel to distant, mountainous areas or even in forests, all kinds of waves are weak, so, are frustrated to access. Furthermore, looking at screens for a long time leads to eye diseases such as eyestrain, dry eye, blurry vision. The reason is the blue light from screens of smartphones, tablets affects negatively directly to our eyes.
Inclusion, it’s undeniable of the preference of digital books and e-news, but traditional paper materials remain existing in modern life thanks to the merits they bring for people that I have said above.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: Much; Little
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Message: Possible agreement error. The noun news seems to be uncountable; consider using: 'much news', 'a good deal of news'.
Suggestion: Much news; A good deal of news
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, look, second, secondly, so, still, for instance, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 7.85571142285 0% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1519.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 271.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.60516605166 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05734859645 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.9401282236 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.671586715867 0.561755894193 120% => OK
syllable_count: 465.3 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.9859213289 49.4020404114 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.846153846 106.682146367 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.8461538462 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.07692307692 7.06120827912 129% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.166394708466 0.244688304435 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0552522561967 0.084324248473 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0478608209818 0.0667982634062 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.102835875539 0.151304729494 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0509358258768 0.056905535591 90% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.4 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.26 12.4159519038 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.22 8.58950901804 119% => OK
difficult_words: 96.0 78.4519038076 122% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 9.78957915832 128% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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