In the future, there will be a higher proportion of older people than younger people in many countries. Why is this? Is this a positive or negative development?
The number of senior citizens will increase significantly than youth in several countries of the world in coming days. This is due to rapid advancement in medical science and it should be seen as a positive development because they have a wealth of lifetimes experiences through which they can contribute to the society.
In recent era people have higher life expectancy than before due to tremendous medical advancements. People used to die of diseases like tuberculosis, cancer or even in AIDS just a few decades ago. But discovery of modern investigative procedures and pharmaceuticals treatment options provided physicians with a vast resource to treat these patients. Moreover, general people are now very much health conscious than ever before. For example, people do check their diet, try to do exercise almost everyday, go to doctors for routine check ups. All there activities keep them healthy and disease free. Therefore, people are living more than before and thus the numbers of senior citizens are rising in certain demographics.
Older people have a wealth of skills and experiences which can contribute to the community and society. Older people can influence on a macro level to the workplace and financially and at a local level to their communities and individual networks in term of experience. For instance, senior citizens of some countries form a club/organization so that they can do social or voluntary work which is helpful for the society. In addition, as the youth of the family are not available all the time to give company, sometimes they are theirs companions. Moreover, in many society, grandparents use to take care of their grandson or daughter and thus contributing to the economy.
In conclusion, medical science has increased peoples life expectancy far from before and thus the number of older people are getting high than younger. This is a positive development for the society as youth can learn from their lifetime experiences.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: 'Everyday' is an adjective. Did you mean 'every day'?
Suggestion: every day
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Line 5, column 562, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun society seems to be countable; consider using: 'many societies'.
Suggestion: many societies
...hey are theirs companions. Moreover, in many society, grandparents use to take care of their...
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Line 5, column 589, Rule ID: USE_TO_VERB[1]
Message: Did you mean 'used'?
Suggestion: used
...Moreover, in many society, grandparents use to take care of their grandson or daugh...
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Line 8, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...learn from their lifetime experiences.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, moreover, so, therefore, thus, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1665.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 318.0 315.596192385 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.2358490566 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22286093782 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.97687811819 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.569182389937 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 533.7 506.74238477 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.695944918 49.4020404114 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.0625 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.875 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.8125 7.06120827912 82% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.270252238768 0.244688304435 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0791148237659 0.084324248473 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0572735911047 0.0667982634062 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.169347195608 0.151304729494 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0602744537531 0.056905535591 106% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.0946893788 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.11 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.6 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 9.78957915832 128% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.