The gap between education in richer countries and education in poorer countries is a growing concern What solutions can you suggest to deal with this situation

It is true that, to cope up with today's world, it is necessary for to be well educated. But nowadays, education has only become possible for rich countries, because poor countries have no enough budgets to promote education in their country. This trend is broadening the education gap between countries. Therefore, some suggestion should be taken in order to solve this problem.

To begin with, due to globalisation, imparting knowledge to underprivileged people through online and education channels has become easier. The education in poor and developing countries should be given in this same way. Moreover, rich countries should have to provide study materials to the people of poorer countries, so that, they can complete their goals. In addition, representatives of developed countries should make programs to give information about science's new discoveries and inventions to the individuals of poorer countries.

Furthermore, the governments of the rich countries should allow the students of the poorer countries to come to their country for educational purposes. This practice will also in the favour of a host country in the aspect of economic growth. Similarly, global unions of rich countries should discuss ways to exchange knowledge and give away better study methods and structures for the pupils of poorer countries.

Last but not the least, if rich countries help the poor countries it will be easy for the rich countries to establish their business in poorer countries. Further, rich countries might get respect from all over the world.

In conclusion, there are various ways to help the poor countries in a field of education, such as, by providing education materials and teaching them about studies structures and methods.

Votes
Average: 8.4 (6 votes)

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, moreover, similarly, so, therefore, well, in addition, in conclusion, such as, it is true, to begin with

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1483.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 275.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.39272727273 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07223819929 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90863632812 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 149.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.541818181818 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 434.7 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.3255356668 49.4020404114 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.928571429 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.6428571429 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.42857142857 7.06120827912 134% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.323627607032 0.244688304435 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.129832717378 0.084324248473 154% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.068899718742 0.0667982634062 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.193049766582 0.151304729494 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0496979889207 0.056905535591 87% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.98 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.2 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 78.4519038076 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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