Getting a university degree is the best way to succeed. Discuss.
These days, the idea of how to succeed is a great concern to people. It is believed that getting a university degree is considered to be the best route to success. While I agree that people can be successful when they have a university degree, I also believe that people can succeed without it.
On the one hand, getting a university degree helps people succeed because of its great advantages. First, tertiary education helps people fully equip with skills and widen their knowledge. For this reason, people can easily get a good job. These days, more and more companies and recruiters prefer people who have good qualifications rather than those who do not. Therefore, people with a university degree can have more chances to meet the demands of employers when they apply for jobs in the future. In fact, people who have good positions in the workplace can be considered as they are successful. Second, getting a university degree helps people fulfill their dreams, which can lead to success. For example, if a person wants to become a successful doctor, lawyer, or teacher, he or she must have a degree. Additionally, having a university degree shows that people have a strong and serious attitude to achieve their goals, and those who have ambitions to achieve can easily come close to success.
On the other hand, people in the world today can also be successful without a university degree. Having a degree is the shortest way leading to success, but it is not the best way. People who cannot afford or do not have the opportunity to attend university succeed because that can take chances. They attend vocational schools to learn soft skills, and soon they can join the workplace to accumulate experiences. As a result, they are successful people because they are employed and earn their living by themselves. Besides, some people who did not graduate or attend university are successful because they know how to run their businesses. Indeed, they spend time experiencing the job market to know what it needs, then collecting experiences to open their own.
In conclusion, people can be successful whether they get a university degree or not. In my point of view, getting a university degree is a good way leading to success, but people also succeed if they take chances and challenges in life.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, if, second, so, then, therefore, while, for example, in conclusion, in fact, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 7.30460921844 192% => OK
Pronoun: 38.0 24.0651302605 158% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1916.0 1615.20841683 119% => OK
No of words: 391.0 315.596192385 124% => OK
Chars per words: 4.90025575448 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.44676510885 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65845674885 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 176.041082164 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.450127877238 0.561755894193 80% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 602.1 506.74238477 119% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 0.809619238477 618% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 16.0721442886 131% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 29.3202661061 49.4020404114 59% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 91.2380952381 106.682146367 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.619047619 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.38095238095 7.06120827912 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 19.0 8.67935871743 219% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.250809373395 0.244688304435 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.108678583263 0.084324248473 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.115285485003 0.0667982634062 173% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.218442430529 0.151304729494 144% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0753032658046 0.056905535591 132% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 13.0946893788 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.14 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.15 8.58950901804 83% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 78.4519038076 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, if, second, so, then, therefore, while, for example, in conclusion, in fact, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 7.30460921844 192% => OK
Pronoun: 38.0 24.0651302605 158% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1916.0 1615.20841683 119% => OK
No of words: 391.0 315.596192385 124% => OK
Chars per words: 4.90025575448 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.44676510885 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65845674885 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 176.041082164 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.450127877238 0.561755894193 80% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 602.1 506.74238477 119% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 0.809619238477 618% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 16.0721442886 131% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 29.3202661061 49.4020404114 59% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 91.2380952381 106.682146367 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.619047619 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.38095238095 7.06120827912 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 19.0 8.67935871743 219% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.250809373395 0.244688304435 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.108678583263 0.084324248473 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.115285485003 0.0667982634062 173% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.218442430529 0.151304729494 144% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0753032658046 0.056905535591 132% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 13.0946893788 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.14 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.15 8.58950901804 83% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 78.4519038076 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.