The government should control the amount of violence in films and on television in order to decrease the violent crimes in society. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
The government which have to rule the amount of violence scenes in movies and TV programs in order to decline the violent misdeeds in community. I strongly believe that parents should limit to watch their children movies on order to decrease tendency to crime.
First of all, violence scenes will influence to children psychology. For instance my cousin who watches violence movies such as Venom, Transformers and Movies of Marvel and CD. In consequence my cousin imitates their actions, furthermore these are harmful for children psychologies. If my cousin didn’t watch violence movies, he would not imitate to action of movies scenes.
On the other hand parents should control their children with effective way. This is because children watch movies without looking censorships of their films such as 6+,8+,12+ and 18+.For example this days several movies have, in addition according to types of movies has lots of censorship .If censorships did not announced by government before presentation of films, it would produce more tendency to crime than nowadays. In consequence parents have to declare their children limitation moreover using the limit of their medias in order to decrease tendency to crime.
In conclusion parents ought to monitor about using their medias. In the future it would be positive to children psychology and their behaviors.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, furthermore, if, look, moreover, so, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, such as, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 13.1623246493 23% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1145.0 1615.20841683 71% => OK
No of words: 214.0 315.596192385 68% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.35046728972 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.82475343497 4.20363070211 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68608682862 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 121.0 176.041082164 69% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.565420560748 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 342.0 506.74238477 67% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 76.4476810236 49.4020404114 155% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.090909091 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.4545454545 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.6363636364 7.06120827912 179% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 14.0 5.01903807615 279% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.140016203432 0.244688304435 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0603657863338 0.084324248473 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0580337135622 0.0667982634062 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0955614919268 0.151304729494 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0890388387516 0.056905535591 156% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.0946893788 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.75 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.64 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 78.4519038076 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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