The government should control the amount of violence in films and on television in order to decrease the violent crimes in society. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
The government has to rule the number of violent scenes in movies and TV programs in order to decline the violent misdeeds in the community. I strongly believe that parents should limit watching their children's movies in order to decrease the tendency to crimes.
First of all, violent scenes will influence children's psychology. For instance, my cousin watches violent movies such as Venom, Transformers, and Movies of Marvel and CD. In consequence, my cousin imitates their actions, furthermore these are harmful to children's psychologies. If my cousin didn’t watch violent movies, he would not imitate the action of movie scenes.
On the other hand, parents should control their children in an effective way. This is because children watch movies without looking censorship of their films such as 6+,8+,12+, and 18+. For example these days several movies have, in addition, according to types of movies has lots of censorship. If censorship did not announce by the government before the presentation of films, it would produce more tendency to crime than nowadays. In consequence, parents have to declare their children limitation moreover using the limit of their media in order to decrease the tendency to crime.
In conclusion, parents ought to monitor about using their media. In the future, it would be positive for children's psychology and their behaviors.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, furthermore, if, look, moreover, so, as to, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, such as, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 13.1623246493 23% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 1.0 7.30460921844 14% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1156.0 1615.20841683 72% => OK
No of words: 217.0 315.596192385 69% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.32718894009 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.8380880478 4.20363070211 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74802792919 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 121.0 176.041082164 69% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.557603686636 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 341.1 506.74238477 67% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 26.6890931339 49.4020404114 54% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 88.9230769231 106.682146367 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.6923076923 20.7667163134 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.2307692308 7.06120827912 159% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.121961337148 0.244688304435 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0489360223449 0.084324248473 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0446108893159 0.0667982634062 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0809024406038 0.151304729494 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0657748773136 0.056905535591 116% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.34 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.58 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 78.4519038076 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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