GOVERNMENT SHOULD FUND SCIENTIFIC RATHER THAN COMMERCIAL ORGANIZATION.TO WHAT EXTENT DO YOU AGREE OR DISAGREE WITH THE STATEMENT
Scientific research plays a significant role in the development of the country in many ways. It's commonly held belief that countries administration should finance scientific research in spite private organizations. I completely disagree with the notion by stating that as it is beneficial not only government officials but also to the entire nations progression. So, it should be supported by the profitable private groups.
Firstly, in many countries scientific research projects are funded by government and private organizations together with an agreement which in turn benefits both in terms of revenue and also for the benefit of their citizens.Moreover, it helps government to plan budgets for various other development proposals.For example, in my countries reliance group of companies supporting government in many ways for the countries welfare.
Secondly, such research progress helps not only to knowledge advancement of the people of the particular country but also it helps in many ways the entire world .Furthermore, those growth encourages International collaboration in various fields.For instance, ISRO have accepted by various foreigners which was under Indian government.
Contrarily, some people's believe that, government should be fund scientific research because it's a matter of utmost secret of the nation which has revealed to profit making organization are not good choice. Sometimes, it leads to corruption inside and outside the nation. For example, Bribery for our own benefit is common nowadays.
To conclude this, i personally believe that Both government and private groups should be financed equally for the scientific research such togetherness helps the nation to gather revenue and expansion of other departments.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, for example, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 18.0 8.3376753507 216% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1505.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 260.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.78846153846 5.12529762239 113% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01553427287 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.18974642386 2.80592935109 114% => OK
Unique words: 147.0 176.041082164 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.565384615385 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 454.5 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 119.291449819 49.4020404114 241% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 150.5 106.682146367 141% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.0 20.7667163134 125% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.1 7.06120827912 143% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 5.01903807615 239% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.149143191399 0.244688304435 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0634273459199 0.084324248473 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0509164539894 0.0667982634062 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0895834703362 0.151304729494 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0483512276906 0.056905535591 85% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.8 13.0946893788 144% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.63 50.2224549098 73% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.6 12.4159519038 134% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.54 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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