The government should pay for people`s health care and education. To what extent do you agree or disagree.
Although some people subscribe a belief that that citizens` health care and education cost should be paid by the governments, this is in fact a common misconception that we need to clear up. Personally, I believe that this practice is unwise. The expenditures of health and education should be bared by ourselves.
Some sound arguments have been made to defense that people should pay for health care and education by themselves. First of all, the financial resource to cover the cost of people`s medical care and education is from taxpayers. If the governments funds people`s health care and education, it would cause a heavy financial burden on every taxpayers. Young taxpayer, in particular would boost their symptom of discontent about this practice. Furthermore, as the governments spend a large amount of money on people`s welfare of medical care and education, it would lead to a lack of funds for other necessary areas such as infrastructure, economic development and environmental protection. The society could not moving forward without booting in those fields. Last but not at least, this practice may hold an appeal to some illegal immigrates who come to the nation merely for free health care and education. Nevertheless,it would pose a serious threat to the society because of this unequal practice.
On the other hand,firstly, first of all, the government should reward taxpayer with health care and education. Secondly, by providing citizen with education and health care, the government helps to promote economic and technological development and increase the competitiveness of the workforce in the global economy. Thirdly, there are people who can not afford basic health care or educational need, they feel that they are treated unfairly by the government, which would be a source of social unrest.
To conclude, I concede that government should not ignore the disadvantaged people and boost the ability of working force. They deserve more financial support not only from government but from other charity organizations and individuals. However, the cost of healthcare and education paid by the governments is undesirable .
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, may, nevertheless, second, secondly, so, third, thirdly, at least, in fact, in particular, such as, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 7.85571142285 191% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 10.4138276553 173% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 19.0 8.3376753507 228% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1836.0 1615.20841683 114% => OK
No of words: 338.0 315.596192385 107% => OK
Chars per words: 5.43195266272 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28774723029 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.12730001679 2.80592935109 111% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.529585798817 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 563.4 506.74238477 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.8392482835 49.4020404114 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.0 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.8823529412 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.4705882353 7.06120827912 148% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.333496423913 0.244688304435 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.108624456851 0.084324248473 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0849013731456 0.0667982634062 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.195698191926 0.151304729494 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0670309647683 0.056905535591 118% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.21 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.41 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.