Governments should spend money on railways rather than roads.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
In recent- years . government focuses on improving quality of life, that would bring a
lot benefits for citizens. Such as communication, transportation, health care . Some,
argument that built railways is more, useful for local people than roads. In my opinion, it is good idea that more train nation is built. There are some reasons.
first of all, it reduced pollution when more people give, up driving to work in weekday. Nowadays, people spend a lot of time. on the road in rush hours. At the same time, emissions of car bring a pollution in our environment . People easily get upset, if they got into traffic jam for longtime. Research has shown that it is get more, pollution of air that car stopped on the road with cutting power. Transition is a good way to make, easy that train never could get into congestion and train is a public, transport which is more helpful to reduce, air pollution.
Secondly, it solved congestion on tine road while many people commute, by train, nearly years, a number of car is growing. So, a question that a number of car is over volumed of road is following. This caused traffic jam have, being horrible problem. However, the train mill take. more, people, to go to their destinations without waiting on road in rush
hour. It is more convience for crtizen.
finally, taking public transport is cheaper than private vehicle. People could save, money to do others -they intested.
Overall, government pay more, money for building railway. It bring more it is a good decision that advantages than drawbacks.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, however, if, second, secondly, so, while, such as, first of all, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 1.0 10.4138276553 10% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1296.0 1615.20841683 80% => OK
No of words: 264.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.90909090909 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03089032464 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59289122562 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.606060606061 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 386.1 506.74238477 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 16.0721442886 143% => OK
Sentence length: 11.0 20.2975951904 54% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 33.2856117124 49.4020404114 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 56.347826087 106.682146367 53% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 11.4782608696 20.7667163134 55% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 4.08695652174 7.06120827912 58% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 8.0 4.38176352705 183% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 13.0 5.01903807615 259% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 3.4128256513 293% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0975776371122 0.244688304435 40% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0280517957803 0.084324248473 33% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0428555319399 0.0667982634062 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0501377960104 0.151304729494 33% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0468965608811 0.056905535591 82% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.4 13.0946893788 57% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 68.77 50.2224549098 137% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 11.3001002004 57% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 10.01 12.4159519038 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.77 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 78.4519038076 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 4.0 9.78957915832 41% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.4 10.1190380762 63% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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