A growing number of people feel that animals should not be exploited by people and that they should have the same rights as humans, while others argue that humans must employ animals to satisfy their various needs, including uses for food and research.
Discuss both views and give your opinion.
The concern of animal exploitation has raised over and again during over a decade in general and media too. Whether animals ought to be used for the mankind betterment or not has sparked a heated debate. This essay will examine the for and against of animal exploitation
Multifarious points are there to shore up my view. To start with, some people claim that animals bodies are similar as human body to a great extend. Thence, animal testing should be continue in order to find various drugs to cure mankind. For instance, in India, a terrifying disease called chicken pox, spread nationwide which further got cure and drugs were invented after testing on a monkey. Adding to it, they believe that, animal are also great source of guarding and use number of animal breeds in guarding their homes. Others have conflicting views.
They believe that, using animals for own good is unkind. Animal also have all the organs as human it pains them when human do various tests on them. Hence, blood sports should be outlaw immediately. Furthermore, not all the tests done on animals are success and useful for human as their bodies are not 10 percent similar. so, it's not worthy to associate them in useless researches
In my notion, we cannot neglect the fact that animal testing has made it possible for human to find drug for millions of unknown and live taking diseases. But, it cant be forgotten that over use of animals in testing is causing disappear of animal those are on alarming rate. Thus, under great deal of supervision, animal testing should be done in limited way
To recapitulate, animals are among the wonderful creation of god. we should respect the gift of god inspite of hurting them through silly activities
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'furthermore', 'hence', 'if', 'so', 'then', 'thus', 'for instance', 'in general', 'to start with']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.25 0.247107183377 101% => OK
Verbs: 0.170731707317 0.155533422707 110% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0975609756098 0.0946595960268 103% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0396341463415 0.0501214627716 79% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0518292682927 0.0437548338989 118% => OK
Prepositions: 0.149390243902 0.122226691241 122% => OK
Participles: 0.0609756097561 0.0403226058552 151% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.39608732681 2.80594681477 85% => OK
Infinitives: 0.030487804878 0.0326793684256 93% => OK
Particles: 0.0030487804878 0.00163938923432 186% => OK
Determiners: 0.0487804878049 0.0861772015684 57% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0213414634146 0.021408717616 100% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.00609756097561 0.011925033212 51% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1728.0 1933.35771543 89% => OK
No of words: 296.0 316.048096192 94% => OK
Chars per words: 5.83783783784 6.12580529183 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14784890444 4.20517956788 99% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.375 0.374742101984 100% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.243243243243 0.28420135186 86% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.097972972973 0.203846283523 48% => More words length more than 7 chars wanted.
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0641891891892 0.137316102897 47% => More words length more than 8 chars wanted.
Word Length SD: 2.39608732681 2.80594681477 85% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 176.037074148 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.584459459459 0.56093040696 104% => OK
Word variations: 63.0931056918 60.7387585426 104% => OK
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0891783567 99% => OK
Sentence length: 18.5 20.7743622355 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.5114927347 49.517814964 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.0 127.492653851 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5 20.7743622355 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.6875 0.814263465372 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38877755511 114% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 3.99599198397 200% => Correct essay format wanted or double check grammar & spelling issues after essay writing.
Readability: 42.8243243243 49.1944974215 87% => OK
Elegance: 1.75581395349 1.69124875643 104% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.31191573168 0.332605444948 94% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0810199013842 0.102741220458 79% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0740866805752 0.0668466124924 111% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.489866676702 0.534860350844 92% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.173720564534 0.148594505496 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.116310189229 0.134430193775 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0397399226242 0.0742795772207 54% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.205323891317 0.324371583561 63% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0196634532299 0.0638462369009 31% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.186667835826 0.228012699653 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0345242444305 0.058150111329 59% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.68436873747 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.41683366733 146% => OK
Positive topic words: 5.0 5.90881763527 85% => OK
Negative topic words: 4.0 2.5751503006 155% => OK
Neutral topic words: 5.0 1.9629258517 255% => OK
Total topic words: 14.0 10.4468937876 134% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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