A growing number of people feel that animals should not be exploited by people and that they should have the same rights as humans, while others argue that humans must employ animals to satisfy their various needs, including uses for food and research.
Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Animals are believed to be the second highest creation of God in this world. While humans are considered to come first, animals are tend to be utilized and at worst, be exploited. As to my opinion, I certainly view animals as creations that breathe the same air as humans do and therefore, should have equal rights in every part of the world. This essay will discuss both views as to whether animals should or should not held to exploitation.
It is undeniably true that animals has helped in many various ways for human survival. Many people believed that animals are great sources of food for humans. Moreover, scientists has been continuously convincing people that some animals are best options for the creation of new medicine for currently emerging diseases. Agriculture has also been using animals for plowing and harvesting crops and are used as a mode of transportation in some areas likewise. These are plenty of ways that animals are considered to be very helpful and must be excluded from scrutiny.
As to when animals do get exploited? Animal abuse is what the fashion industry does. They continue using animal parts and skin for creating expensive and rather extravagant products to satisfy humans and this is one of the main reasons why a great number of people protest. Animals are used for lucrative trades too, especially those that are considered exotic even when facing great extinction. They are sold in discreet places to avoid getting caught. With the advancement of technology nowadays, animals should no longer be used as a mode of transportation, Instead, be replaced with sufficient mobile transport.
The comparison of humans having much better intellect than animals lead to the mentality that humans are supreme beings. I strongly believe that animals should not be exploited for unreasonable and outdated reasons. However, take into consideration of how much animals are of great help to humans.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'tended'.
Suggestion: tended
...e considered to come first, animals are tend to be utilized and at worst, be exploit...
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Line 1, column 379, Rule ID: WHETHER[6]
Message: Can you shorten this phrase to just 'whether', or rephrase the sentence to avoid "as to"?
Suggestion: whether
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Message: The verb 'should' requires the base form of the verb: 'hold'
Suggestion: hold
...to whether animals should or should not held to exploitation. It is undeniably tr...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
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...ging diseases. Agriculture has also been using animals for plowing and harvesting...
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...es. They continue using animal parts and skin for creating expensive and rather e...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
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...and outdated reasons. However, take into consideration of how much animals are of...
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Message: Use 'many' with countable nouns.
Suggestion: many
...owever, take into consideration of how much animals are of great help to humans.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, however, likewise, moreover, second, so, therefore, while, as to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 26.0 13.1623246493 198% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1621.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 317.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.11356466877 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21953715646 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71952467671 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.561514195584 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 515.7 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 41.9079311272 49.4020404114 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.0555555556 106.682146367 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.6111111111 20.7667163134 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.27777777778 7.06120827912 61% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.427653447389 0.244688304435 175% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.135542294515 0.084324248473 161% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0525950734936 0.0667982634062 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.259922036992 0.151304729494 172% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0161665549747 0.056905535591 28% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 13.0946893788 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.06 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.61 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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