Having more money and less free time is better than earning less money and having more free time. Discuss both views and state your opinion.
People often face a problem of balancing earning money and resting, which are usually considered to be incompatible things. That is why, each person to choose the point which is more crucial for oneself and to concentrate on it. There are some arguments in favour of both views, however, I believe free time not money makes us happy and enjoying the life.
To begin with, the decision of giving preference to money rather than to relaxing seems to be reasonable. Firstly, money buy a luxury life: being rich enough one can afford everything one has ever dreamed of. Undoubtely, the possibility of purchasing what is desirable looks like a magic: there is no need in taking care how to live next week and in allocating family budget. To add, the opportunity to help others appears when possessing much money. Money are often donated by celebrities to ill children and animals, poor regions and to environment-saving fonds. All in all, for some cases saving money is worth lacking free time.
On the other hand,i n most situations, earning luxury living takes all the 24 hours a day, 7 days a week. Such people usually go the extra mile just to get more money. It seems like they work against the clock: they have no spare time to spend it acompanied by family or friends. A problem of lonely children lacking parents’ attention is a widespread one in developed societies, as adults consider money earning to be a top-priority purpose of a happy life.
Personally, I am one of those who prefer free time instead of getting money. I feel like if a person works so hard in order to get as many financial resources as it is possible, there are not any chances to spend saving money. Being stuck at a job all the time makes impossible, for instance, enjoying holidays in foregn countries or spending a evening with beloved partner in a restaurant. Possesing a lot of money looks senseless if there are no ideas how to deal with it.
In conclusion, money makes people confident in tomorrow and makes everything in the world affordable. But, obviously, lack of spare time limits the happiness and all opportunities presented by finances. To my mind, time is the most valuable thing in our life and cannot be replaced by being busy with earning for living.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, however, if, look, so, for instance, i feel, in conclusion, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 57.0 41.998997996 136% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1872.0 1615.20841683 116% => OK
No of words: 393.0 315.596192385 125% => OK
Chars per words: 4.76335877863 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.45244063426 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72989688769 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 224.0 176.041082164 127% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.569974554707 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 602.1 506.74238477 119% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.4028933893 49.4020404114 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.6 106.682146367 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.65 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.65 7.06120827912 80% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.258618668476 0.244688304435 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0771530753127 0.084324248473 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0512815404922 0.0667982634062 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.149761548255 0.151304729494 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0289492738925 0.056905535591 51% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 13.0946893788 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.33 12.4159519038 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.95 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 78.4519038076 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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