Having more money and less free time is better than earning less money and having more free time.
Discuss both views and give your opinion.
People have varying views about whether financial abundance is more significant than having enough free time. Some believe that getting more money but having little spare time is more important than having fewer money but more free time. In my perspective, I consider having more money than having more extra time.
The primary purpose of working is to increase wealth and it is undeniably true that one can gain access to anything if he has a good fortune, thereby consuming more time of the day. For example, buying an expensive tour, attending an exclusive concert, and even reserving a seat on the cruise is a no sweat when you have enough funds to pay for these trips and activities. Although many people will not agree, we cannot deny that money controls everything such as food, bills, rent, clothes, water, together with education and vacation.
Conversely, some people hold the concept that having more time to spare surpass having more money as life does not revolve around work and getting enough rest is vital in our wellbeing. While money can pay for everything, it can buy neither happiness nor health. For instance, one can spend time with family, friends and even enroll in the gym thus giving portions of priority in fitness together with social, emotional, mental and overall health. The only drawback is that we cannot afford either a gym membership or a dinner with family and friends, if we do not have enough cash. In other words, money is imperative to enjoy that extra time.
In conclusion, I think it is indispensable that having more money indeed can provide both our necessities and wants outside work thereby earning more money and having less free time defeats less money but more free time.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'less money'?
Suggestion: less money
...pare time is more important than having fewer money but more free time. In my perspective, ...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ther with education and vacation. Conversely, some people hold the concept...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, conversely, if, so, thus, well, while, for example, for instance, i think, in conclusion, such as, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 41.998997996 57% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1446.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 293.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.93515358362 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13729897018 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.37488224903 2.80592935109 85% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.563139931741 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 453.6 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.5088001133 49.4020404114 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.5 106.682146367 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.4166666667 20.7667163134 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.83333333333 7.06120827912 139% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.541958520603 0.244688304435 221% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.217753336135 0.084324248473 258% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.199108318185 0.0667982634062 298% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.374240969384 0.151304729494 247% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.218744562218 0.056905535591 384% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 13.0946893788 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 50.2224549098 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.67 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.06 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 78.4519038076 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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