Housing and accommodation has become a major problem in many countries around the world, what any some of the man factors that have contributed to this problem? What can be done to help reduce the number of homeless people?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
Resident and accommodation were a big point at issue in all countries around the world. This article shows about the foremost factors that have assign to this problem is fewer job vacancy and then provide job vacancy and then provide job vacancy with open investment from abroad as the most viable solution, followed by a reasoned conclusion.
The main factors that make number of homeless people are fewer job vacancies. Most of people thinking to make money usually must become employee. Increasing amount of company is not proportional with amount of jobless. So many people have not resident and cannot pay the primer cost.
Possible solutions to reduce the number homeless people are providing many job vacancies to give permission for foreigners to infestation in Indonesia. Singapore is one of the country has a little unemployment because they are success make many investor from the others country to infestation the money in their countries.
To conclude, shelter and accommodations is the most important for many people. People become unemployment because of fewer job vacancy and are of solution for that government give permission for people from the others country to make multinational corporation in Indonesia. So that many corporation and the unemployment can work in the corporation and they can make money for resident and accommodation.
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the foremost factors that have assign to this problem is fewer job vacancy
the foremost factors that have assigned to this problem are fewer job vacancies
and then provide job vacancy and then provide job vacancy with open investment from abroad
then provide job vacancy with open investment from abroad
must become employee.
must become employees.
Singapore is one of the country
Singapore is one of the countries
because they are success make many investor
because they are successful to make many investors
shelter and accommodations is the most important
shelter and accommodations are most important
Sentence: Possible solutions to reduce the number homeless people are providing many job vacancies to give permission for foreigners to infestation in Indonesia.
Description: A noun, singular, common is not usually followed by an adjective
Suggestion: Refer to number and homeless
Sentence: People become unemployment because of fewer job vacancy and are of solution for that government give permission for people from the others country to make multinational corporation in Indonesia.
Description: The fragment government give permission is rare
Suggestion: Possible agreement error: Replace give with verb, present tense, 3rd person singular
Description: A noun, plural, common is not usually followed by a noun, singular, common
Suggestion: Refer to others and country
flaws:
No. of Grammatical Errors: 9 2
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Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 4.5 out of 9
Category: Poor Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 9 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 11 15
No. of Words: 216 350
No. of Characters: 1125 1500
No. of Different Words: 108 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 3.834 4.7
Average Word Length: 5.208 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.841 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 88 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 65 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 45 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 30 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 19.636 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 9.518 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.273 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.389 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.617 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.074 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 4 5
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 145, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'assigned'.
Suggestion: assigned
...ws about the foremost factors that have assign to this problem is fewer job vacancy an...
^^^^^^
Line 3, column 79, Rule ID: MOST_SOME_OF_NNS[1]
Message: After 'Most of', you should use 'the' ('Most of the people') or simply say ''Most people''.
Suggestion: Most of the people; Most people
...omeless people are fewer job vacancies. Most of people thinking to make money usually must bec...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 241, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun investor seems to be countable; consider using: 'many investors'.
Suggestion: many investors
...mployment because they are success make many investor from the others country to infestation ...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 284, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun corporation seems to be countable; consider using: 'many corporations'.
Suggestion: many corporations
...ional corporation in Indonesia. So that many corporation and the unemployment can work in the co...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Discourse Markers used:
['so', 'then', 'in fact']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.308695652174 0.247107183377 125% => OK
Verbs: 0.147826086957 0.155533422707 95% => OK
Adjectives: 0.104347826087 0.0946595960268 110% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0434782608696 0.0501214627716 87% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0130434782609 0.0437548338989 30% => Some pronouns wanted.
Prepositions: 0.130434782609 0.122226691241 107% => OK
Participles: 0.0217391304348 0.0403226058552 54% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.91104690816 2.80594681477 104% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0347826086957 0.0326793684256 106% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00163938923432 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0869565217391 0.0861772015684 101% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0173913043478 0.021408717616 81% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.00869565217391 0.011925033212 73% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1366.0 1933.35771543 71% => OK
No of words: 216.0 316.048096192 68% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.32407407407 6.12580529183 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.83365862548 4.20517956788 91% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.412037037037 0.374742101984 110% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.305555555556 0.28420135186 108% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.212962962963 0.203846283523 104% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.152777777778 0.137316102897 111% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91104690816 2.80594681477 104% => OK
Unique words: 107.0 176.037074148 61% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.49537037037 0.56093040696 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
Word variations: 43.7652946625 60.7387585426 72% => OK
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0891783567 68% => OK
Sentence length: 19.6363636364 20.7743622355 95% => OK
Sentence length SD: 60.2468750261 49.517814964 122% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.181818182 127.492653851 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.6363636364 20.7743622355 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.272727272727 0.814263465372 33% => More Discourse Markers wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38877755511 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 3.99599198397 100% => OK
Readability: 50.1919191919 49.1944974215 102% => OK
Elegance: 2.25531914894 1.69124875643 133% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.478758744691 0.332605444948 144% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.146041840683 0.102741220458 142% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.075197905909 0.0668466124924 112% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.608723541388 0.534860350844 114% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.147622466185 0.148594505496 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.212986760049 0.134430193775 158% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0620530507059 0.0742795772207 84% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.288799930796 0.324371583561 89% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.107494497142 0.0638462369009 168% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.315261541052 0.228012699653 138% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0468321237604 0.058150111329 81% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.68436873747 58% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.41683366733 88% => OK
Positive topic words: 5.0 5.90881763527 85% => OK
Negative topic words: 3.0 2.5751503006 116% => OK
Neutral topic words: 2.0 1.9629258517 102% => OK
Total topic words: 10.0 10.4468937876 96% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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