The idea of having a single career is becoming an old fashioned one. The new fashion will be to have several careers or ways of earning money and further education will be something that continues throughout life.
Use your own ideas, knowledge and experience and support your arguments with examples and with relevant evidence.
The corporate world is vastly evolving, specializing in one career path is no longer the norm. People has seen the many advantages of having several careers, while others also think that finding other means of earning income and continuing education will be helpful throughout their lives. Personally, I think that all these perspectives are more advantageous in the long term as compared to old fashion ways of thinking.
Nowadays, it is normal for professionals to have multiple jobs as they can earn more money the quickest possible way. One reason for them not to stick to one career path is that it makes their work experiences more broad, therefore they can apply to different fields entirely. Another important reality is no jobs are firmly secured especially for ordinary employees. For example nurses in the Philippines has to adapt with the small earnings provided working as a medical practitioner, in order to cope they work in other industries such as the business process outsourcing industry or BPO. Call centers or BPOs as commonly known, may not be the same field that these nurses studied while in college but these companies provide a better deal of wage levels and benefits , hence , they choose to work in this industry. Another case in point, with the advent of online commerce more people are getting the chance to sell their merchandises without having to put up their own physical store giving them more leverage in terms of operational costs. These people work their normal jobs everyday and sell stuff off the internet as their secondary means of income, so in essence they are both an ordinary worker and an online entrepreneur. Furthermore, a huge chunk of corporate workers also sees education as a means to better equip them once they lose their jobs or retire. It is not uncommon seeing professionals attending business seminars and other similar classes in order to broaden their scope and business perspectives.
In conclusion, while having a steady paying job has its own merits, I personally think that equipping yourself with a much wider knowledge in other businesses and expertise give a better advantage in the long term.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: ,
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Line 3, column 1083, Rule ID: EVERYDAY_EVERY_DAY[3]
Message: 'Everyday' is an adjective. Did you mean 'every day'?
Suggestion: every day
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, hence, if, may, second, so, therefore, while, as to, for example, i think, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 34.0 24.0651302605 141% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1808.0 1615.20841683 112% => OK
No of words: 358.0 315.596192385 113% => OK
Chars per words: 5.05027932961 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34981470047 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69876514972 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 207.0 176.041082164 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.578212290503 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 571.5 506.74238477 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 47.8585193024 49.4020404114 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 139.076923077 106.682146367 130% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.5384615385 20.7667163134 133% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.30769230769 7.06120827912 132% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.16386871871 0.244688304435 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0576654962903 0.084324248473 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0534050853734 0.0667982634062 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.130018573808 0.151304729494 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0794837999644 0.056905535591 140% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.1 13.0946893788 123% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.07 50.2224549098 88% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.31 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.03 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 78.4519038076 117% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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