If an individual acts in an antisocial way ,such as commuting crime then the society of should blame such behaviour.What are the causes behind such behaviour?Who should be responsible for this?
If a person respond to any antisocial activities like criminality then the society should blame this . However, there are numerous causitive factors which give rise to these types of behaviour.Besides this, both individual and government is responsible for this nuisance.
Firstly, poverty is the major contributor for this situation. People do not have have money to fulfill their hunger and shelter needs and for this requirements they indulge in burglary, consequently the crime rate is increasing appreciably. Moreover, unemployment in the country is other factor who create such situation.As there are no jobs, no monetary for food , ultimately enforce people to commit crime.Secondly, living with the persons who involved in bad activities such as drug addiction , alcoholism have maximum role in this due to their participation in illegal smuggling,breaking of laws and in heinous crimes.
However I, not only single individual is responsible for this but also the government and society has huge role in this. Authorities are not rendering opportunities to their citizens for bread earning. For instance, ratio of people according to employment sources is much more higher and this leads to massive competition in the world. Therefore, those persons or who donot qualify them ,are prone to indulge in in bad activities . Additionally, youngsters under the influence of peers and for curiosity involve in taking the drugs. As a result, they loose most of their valuable time in these activities and in the end either they become addicted or do some criminal activities for purchasing more drugs.
To conclude, individual response to any violent behaviour ,crime is only because of the factors like poverty, unemployment,bad company or addiction. However,it is the responsibility of government as well as individual to resolve such situation by taking certain curative measure s so that crime rate can be decreased with duration of time.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, consequently, first, firstly, however, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, then, therefore, well, for instance, such as, as a result, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.3376753507 192% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1641.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 302.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.43377483444 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1687104957 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.21097514775 2.80592935109 114% => OK
Unique words: 183.0 176.041082164 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.605960264901 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 531.9 506.74238477 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 77.5901842142 49.4020404114 157% => OK
Chars per sentence: 126.230769231 106.682146367 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.2307692308 20.7667163134 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.6153846154 7.06120827912 179% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 20.0 5.01903807615 398% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.2742511473 0.244688304435 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0901973004795 0.084324248473 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0607126245955 0.0667982634062 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.170495502637 0.151304729494 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0514556431985 0.056905535591 90% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.8 13.0946893788 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 31.21 50.2224549098 62% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.51 12.4159519038 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.33 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 78.4519038076 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.