If some people get a chance to choose between life without work and spending most of the time working, then they would choose not to work. Agree and disagree?
In the modern era, some people think that when people have an option to select one from life without any work and working for most of the time, they always choose not to do jobs. This essay will discuss why people think in this direction and why I disagree with them, all the explanation is given in the following paragraphs.
To comments with, if people do not have to do any type of work, they spend their time to pleasure activities, with their close ones. Ultimately, since people enjoy these activities, they live more than happier than ever as well as they lived their life the fullest. A result of a survey by the University of Yale, for example, suggested that when people have more time or all time to spend with their family and pleasure, they were less likely to have any mental disorders, heart attacks and many other illnesses. Therefore, these types of evidence prove how life looks if humans do not need to work. Overall, people enjoy their time on the earth because they do what they want to do.
On the other hand, however, life without work lead towards many problems. Firstly, working people, when they stop working, will end in financial problems. Secondly, since they do not have money or any savings, they cannot afford medical treatments for themselves as well as for their family. Apart from this, people become lazier, which is a reason for many health-related problems. One research by the USA, for instance, showed that people who worked more in their adulthood became more physically and mentally strong, and they give better living conditions to their children. Although life without work has many benefits, working most of all the time provides more advantages than it.
In conclusion, many people choose a life without work because it gives them the freedom to do many activities in their life. Whereas doing jobs makes a person mentally and physically capable. In my words, despite having not much time for pleasure things, spending time to work provides many advantages, which are more helpful in the long run for everyone.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, however, if, look, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, whereas, apart from, as for, for example, for instance, in conclusion, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 13.1623246493 30% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 24.0651302605 145% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1713.0 1615.20841683 106% => OK
No of words: 353.0 315.596192385 112% => OK
Chars per words: 4.85269121813 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.33454660006 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.36379478395 2.80592935109 84% => OK
Unique words: 185.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.524079320113 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 533.7 506.74238477 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 10.0 4.76152304609 210% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.3979273833 49.4020404114 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.0625 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0625 20.7667163134 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.875 7.06120827912 154% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.348051231112 0.244688304435 142% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.136465352156 0.084324248473 162% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.102780571631 0.0667982634062 154% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.250384543456 0.151304729494 165% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0429133015388 0.056905535591 75% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 13.0946893788 95% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.85 12.4159519038 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.95 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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