The importance of biodiversity is being more recognized as increasing numbers of species come under threat. What can be done to maintain biodiversity?
In this over-consuming society, preserving our nature seems to be an arduous task The magnitude of biodiversity is more well-known among many species. Therefore, it is essential for humans to come up with solutions to tackle this problem. In my opinion, both individuals and governments have the responsibility of maintaining the habitats.
People should stop doing numbers of activities that cause harm to the environment such as indiscriminate logging or strip mining. Indeed, the loss of woods and trees, as well as soil erosion, are some dire consequences, which directly affect species' habitats. Therefore, industrial factories can strike to seek other alternative materials and resources like cement r solar power. A host of corporations these days has greatly taken the advantages of solar energy for either lighting or manufacturing purposes, which in turn, do their part of preserving nature This is one of the certain approaches for sustainable biodiversity.
Moreover, national and local authorities should take part in this ongoing difficulty. Governments can implement regulations to ensure that their citizens are well- informed about the importance of wildlife habitats. In addition, local schools can educate students at an early age by launching some eco-friendly campaigns that providing participants with practical experiences to raise their awareness of the ecosystem. In Vietnam, some school has encouraged children to grow at least 2 plants at home and bring them to school. So far, those schools together have contributed nearly 1000 trees to keep the atmosphere clean
In conclusion, there should be both people's and authorities' missions to maintain biodiversity. Even in every small action and nice behavior could bring animals green space to survive.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, moreover, so, therefore, well, at least, in addition, in conclusion, such as, as well as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1513.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 271.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.58302583026 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05734859645 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.12776722158 2.80592935109 111% => OK
Unique words: 186.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.686346863469 0.561755894193 122% => OK
syllable_count: 464.4 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.7696643112 49.4020404114 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.384615385 106.682146367 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.8461538462 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.61538461538 7.06120827912 122% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.125868081893 0.244688304435 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0363764829296 0.084324248473 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.039012305235 0.0667982634062 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0737819922687 0.151304729494 49% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0434595610548 0.056905535591 76% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.3 13.0946893788 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.08 12.4159519038 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.93 8.58950901804 116% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 78.4519038076 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.