The importance of fresh water to life and offer your own solutions to preserve this very valuable natural resource.
There is no denying that water is considered as the most crucial element in our life. My following essay will discuss about the magnitude of this indispensable resource and also suggest some efficacious solutions to the problem of water overconsumption.
To commence with, it is undoubted that water plays an integral part in people’s everyday life. Initially, our body is mainly composed of water, 70 percent of body’s weight, which is responsible for the transportation of nutrients contained in the food to the cells where they are utilized. Apart from that, human races have been able to reap an enormous numbers of benefits from using water for agricultures and other backbone industries. People find it crucial to supply their crops such as rice and corn…. with a great deal of water so that they will be capable of growing energetically. Beside that, human beings have taken advantages of hydropower with the aim of producing electricity accompanied by operating machinery. This is one of the cleanest fuel sources of energy which does not pollute the environment like power plants burning fossil fuels.
Nevertheless, as this invaluable source has been drastically wasted, individuals have to take proactive measures to diminish the seriousness of this situation. First and foremost, it is essential to help each citizen instill the momentousness of fresh water by means of holding workshops or making posters on the street along with propagandizing about the unpredictable effects of the shortage of water. Furthermore, the authority needs to impose strict laws on the usage of water, which definitely reduce the squandering water in many factories as well as households. Last but not least, our scientists have contrived to discover life on other planets with a view to lessening the great demand of water everyday.
To sum up, our source of fresh water has been driven on the verge of being used up, therefore, the entire world has to take action to perverse it before it is too late.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: With
...ply their crops such as rice and corn…. with a great deal of water so that they will...
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Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ke power plants burning fossil fuels. Nevertheless, as this invaluable source ...
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Line 3, column 707, Rule ID: EVERYDAY_EVERY_DAY[3]
Message: 'Everyday' is an adjective. Did you mean 'every day'?
Suggestion: every day
... to lessening the great demand of water everyday. To sum up, our source of fresh wate...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, if, nevertheless, so, still, therefore, well, apart from, as to, such as, as well as, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 58.0 41.998997996 138% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1690.0 1615.20841683 105% => OK
No of words: 327.0 315.596192385 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.16819571865 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25242769721 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.9714984357 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 203.0 176.041082164 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.620795107034 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 530.1 506.74238477 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.1243328584 49.4020404114 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.714285714 106.682146367 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.3571428571 20.7667163134 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.0 7.06120827912 127% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.16438274177 0.244688304435 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0554733122703 0.084324248473 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0326935965016 0.0667982634062 49% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.104951374664 0.151304729494 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0389215602017 0.056905535591 68% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.0 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.56 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 99.0 78.4519038076 126% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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