an increase number of people buying what they need online
what are the advantages and disadvantages for both individuals and companies to shopping online
It is true that online shopping is now becoming a common feature of modern commerce. While there are immense benefits pertaining to this trend, it certainly contains some inherent drawbacks.
The main advantage of online transactions over traditional methods that transactions executed through the internet offers an extreme convenience to both buyers and sellers. From a buyer's perspective, online shopping allows people a wide range of choices in terms of goods and services regardless of distance or location. Also, it obviates people’s need of travelling to stores and supermarkets. For example, a customer in China can now easily purchase household furniture from a supplier located in the US and have them transported to his/her doorway just by some clicks through websites such as Amazon and Alibaba, which was nearly impossible in the days before internet-based commerce. For businesses, the internet is an extremely effective channel to distribute their goods and merchandises to customers. Many companies see the online trading platform as a valuable opportunity to expand their business and boost their product consumption.
Despite the aforementioned benefits, the tendency towards online shopping might sometimes cause a number of issues. Firstly, there are some risks existing in purchasing online. Due to the fact that goods and services are transacted through websites, the buyers are incapable of checking the quality of productions before deciding to buy. Therefore buyers faced the risk that the product delivered to them is not of the quality that described on the internet. Secondly, online commerce means lower barriers to enter the retail market which is not necessarily good as competition over companies in a already-tense marketplace would intensify further.
In conclusion, while the trend towards online shopping benefits individuals and enterprises to some extent, it inevitably entails some disadvantages.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Therefore,
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Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, while, for example, in conclusion, such as, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1656.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 291.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.69072164948 5.12529762239 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13022058845 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.08127680007 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 176.041082164 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.604810996564 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 522.9 506.74238477 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.6371719083 49.4020404114 113% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.285714286 106.682146367 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.7857142857 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.42857142857 7.06120827912 119% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.203850992817 0.244688304435 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0624514005541 0.084324248473 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0428682347182 0.0667982634062 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.105245312369 0.151304729494 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0439508556627 0.056905535591 77% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.8 13.0946893788 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 34.26 50.2224549098 68% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.5 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.72 12.4159519038 127% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.16 8.58950901804 118% => OK
difficult_words: 102.0 78.4519038076 130% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.7795591182 148% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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